Drabble: It Was You, Breathless And Torn

Jun 03, 2010 19:27

Title: It Was You, Breathless And Torn
Spoilers: through 9x09 Pandora
Rating: PG-13 (for character death)
A/N: It's about Oliver's thoughts after Chloe kills Tess in the Pandora-verse (read angsty). “I had the shot. I had to take it.” Title from "Into Dust" by Mazzy Star. 100 words.

((“I had the shot. I had to take it.”)) )

fanfiction, chlollie

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whitequeen15 June 4 2010, 04:55:14 UTC
Why are you so good at these? You never waste your words, and somehow you still achieve stuff I've never even read before.

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insanityclings June 4 2010, 19:43:14 UTC
This is the best comment ever. It's so sweet I don't even care it's the only comment for this fic. Thank you!

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sanaazzy August 27 2010, 12:39:14 UTC
for finally destroying Chloe’s ever enduring smile.

wow! poignant! *is in awe*

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insanityclings August 28 2010, 22:14:15 UTC
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, particularly because I seem to have scared almost everyone else off of this fic by revealing it's angsty, but I really loved their relationship in Pandora and it was clear to me this scene was a significant moment between them even if it was chock full of angst.

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miss_morrygan September 24 2010, 23:04:14 UTC
I loved this scene in Pandora and I love how you wrote this piece of work.

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insanityclings September 24 2010, 23:11:13 UTC
Well Pandora is made of win so really that fantastic episode should get most of the credit, I just expanded on some of the emotions going on in the scene but I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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