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insane_songbird

The Third Third 7/10+

Mar 20, 2009 19:25

Title: The Third Third 7/10+

Author: insane_songbird

Rating: R

Words: ~4700

Warnings: Violence (Hello, it’s Ice Hockey!), Language, NC17 later-on (that means sex, people!)

Disclaimer: Slavery is bad... It’s a lie, all of it.
Summary: Being a Texas boy Jared Padalecki couldn’t care less about ice hockey. So Jared is slightly lost, when his new roommate Chad is ( Read more... )

the third third, J², j2au, fanfiction

Comments 101

deansgirl4eva March 20 2009, 19:48:23 UTC

woohoo! *off to read*

insane_songbird March 20 2009, 19:49:33 UTC

OMG... you must have been lurking! *hands over the firts comment cookie*

deansgirl4eva March 20 2009, 20:22:07 UTC

AHAHA. Not so much lurking, but I happened to check my email that notified me of the awesomeness that was this new update!!! XD

And happy to see that at Jared is finally realizing what a mistake he made and now realizes that he wants Jensen...loved both Chad and Chris' reactions to Jared not knowing Jensen was gay...

and the conversation between Jensen and Mack was hilarious, with all the war talk...true military kids...XP

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapters and seeing Jensen and Jared finally talking to each other when they're both on the same page...then they can see how truly awesome they can be together...hehe...

GREAT UPDATE! ^_^

insane_songbird March 20 2009, 20:24:34 UTC

hehe... yes, they'll talk. How could they NOT?? Glad you liked the other boys and Mack, I like her. she's a cool little sister ;)
*hugs* Birdie

nightporters March 20 2009, 20:03:19 UTC

love you loads!! About time Jared had his eyes opened.

insane_songbird March 20 2009, 20:05:29 UTC

eheheheh... thanks, love you too *hugs* and it was.

jmystic March 20 2009, 20:04:28 UTC

wow.. how much do I love this chapter. Mack was awesome so was the brief mention of Josh. Chad and Chris, love them and their friendships with Jared and Jensen. I especially love that Jared is reevaluating everything and looking at life with a new perspective. Wonderful chapter, can't wait for the next installment.

insane_songbird March 20 2009, 20:08:07 UTC

yeah, I really tortured Jay's self value here, but it just came to me like that. My beta looked at me at one point and she just shook her head saying: you are aware you just wrote about two pages of Jared and he didn't even twitch a muscle, he's just there. *lol* I do that a lot ^^
Glad you liked it! *hugs* Birdie

eilan March 20 2009, 20:09:40 UTC

Oh come on, they've got to get together now that everyone knows the whole story!

insane_songbird March 20 2009, 20:22:31 UTC

hey, I still have to fill 3 chapters and an epilogue! Well... right now I dunno how everything should fit into only 3 more chaps *headdesk* we'll see.

deansgirl4eva March 20 2009, 20:18:40 UTC

woohoo! *off to read*