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insane_songbird

The Third Third 1/10+

Mar 06, 2009 22:06

...next part...

So far with the debut of this fic. I hope you liked it. Please gimme FEEDBACK *begs*

Comments 119

alasse March 6 2009, 21:35:23 UTC

This is a really interesting premise - I love it when two people start off prejudiced against each other for whatever reason and then become forced to look deeper. It's always fascinating to see the J's not hitting it off right away, I can't wait to see where you go with that.

Great start! Can't wait for more :D

insane_songbird March 6 2009, 22:10:26 UTC

Thank you *bows* ... yes, there are some cat-fights ahead...

cherry87a March 6 2009, 21:36:24 UTC

agressive jensen me like. Testastorone(don't know how it spells) = HOT! gonna love this very much! =D can't wait for the update! =)

insane_songbird March 6 2009, 22:16:23 UTC

*g* yes, those bad hormones... who says only women have to be their slaves? Thanks for reading and liking it! *hugs*

loathtotell March 6 2009, 21:47:41 UTC

ooh looking forward to more.

insane_songbird March 6 2009, 22:16:45 UTC

Already written and at the beta. Thanks for commenting

hunters_retreat March 6 2009, 21:47:42 UTC

OK.. i'm with Jared on this. Don't know a think about hockey. But I really want to know more about it now :P More please??!!

insane_songbird March 6 2009, 22:18:37 UTC

I dunno anything more about hockey than what you learn when watching a game or two... and I am clueless about the competitions and college anyway since we only have universities here ^^ so I think your safe here. *hugs* Birdie

underdog_14 March 6 2009, 21:48:05 UTC

OMGZ
you are killing me seriously!
jensen as a hockey player "flatlines................"
and jared is the nerdy jock who know nothing about hockey!
dude this is going to be great so so when are u going to post more
"wiggles eyebrows"
i look into the future and see, angst and hurt and lost of other great shit!
tehehheh, i can't believe i haven't read ur work before "falls of bean bag"
oh and i m guessing your computer is working again! which is really awesome :P
ummm what was i going to say "facepalm"
i don't no oh oh PM if u want to talk on msn or whatev :P
great work! i m so looking forward to more !
"squeelz"
<3
K

P.s comment long enough ;)

insane_songbird March 6 2009, 22:22:43 UTC

ehehehe... *g* I'll post as soon as my poor beta gets over her illness and does the next part... it's already written until middle chapter nine. ^^ angst? check. hurt? double check.
You probably didn't read anything of mine before because there are only three fics I ever posted here before... only one is J2--- and one is smut wahaha.
Yes, it is improving but not perfect yet... I'm still nursing it to health. But it's going forward.
*hugs* Birdie
P.S. they are never long enough LOL

underdog_14 March 6 2009, 22:36:22 UTC

lol!
sounds like me beta, but i got another one to help me out so it is o.k i will have stuff up XD
ohh and thank you very much for the add... and i have read part of "mandatory refusal" .. just lost it... "facepalm"
lol thanks for the add btw XD
and i m glad yo hear things are slowly improving for u ;)
"hugs"
K
lol next time i will write longer ones XD

insane_songbird March 6 2009, 22:47:24 UTC

hihi... I have a second beta as well... who is on vacation in England for two weeks right now, so that is just my luck, right? *huggles her betas*
you lost it?? how that?? http://insane-songbird.livejournal.com/10729.html
here you go, sweety.
Yeah... I just found myself thinking "of course underdog saw this popping up over the friendspage." then I was frowning "did I ever friend her? no. How could I not do that??" *facepalm* So I did now *g*