Insights - J2AU hooker!Jensen

[insane_songbird]

 
He smoothed a hand over his forehead pressing the skin between his brows flat to smooth out the frown lines that threatened to become permanent even though he tried to stop that habit. If he started getting wrinkles it wouldn’t bode well. As long as he could make people believe he was still a teenager, the price would be better. The gum he was

Comments

[sasha_dragon]

Absolutely awesome! if you want to turn this into a full length fic then I'm all for it. I loved the relationship between the two men, you can see glimpses of what could be so I hope you continue with it.

[insane_songbird]

I really want to. I'll try but there's a chance my cheerleaders of the other WIPs will kidnap me to finish all that first xD

[mangacat201]

OI--- interesting thing. Somehow Jared kept reminding me of Debra (minus the foul-mouthery *lol*) either way, I was just a bit confused about them knowing and then obviously not really knowing each other, but the CI business, yes, definitely a winner. They're so cute. Now write another installment to get Jensen out of that filthy business pronto!
Cat

[insane_songbird]

well, they know each other like: this is jared, the cop who pays me for info, so far he's been good to me but I do not really trust that to stay this way because I have ISSUES and I'm kinda burned child... and yes, this is jensen, the hooker who's my CI. he doesn't like talking about himself but he's useful and I am kinda feeling protective of the guy for putting him in danger but i also really don't get him.
And yes, the CI idea is actually a dexter theft.

[serendip50]

OMG...this is super.
I adore hooker!Jensen fics and with an asshole pimp too, just perfectly enticing. I'm curious to know who the pimp is and if he will get to 'use' Jensen....that's a hot image, I know, I'm wicked...lol.

It would be interesting to discover how Jared got Jensen to agree to being his informant, as if being a hooker wasn't dangerous enough, add to that having a sleezy, take advantage pimp and being a cop informant...it certainly not a resume for keeping one safe!
And Jensen doesn't appear to expect any special treatment/favours from Jared...on the contrary he is quite ready and willing to 'service' Jared just like any other paying client!

Definitely eager to read more of this, if you have a mind to extend the story....and I pray that you do, it has great potential:). xx

[insane_songbird]

Hehe... yes, Jensen is pretty much between a rock and a hard place right now and he just doesn't let himself believe that Jared's really different.
I want to extend it... I'll just have to try and stuff it in my schedule somehow because that one's kins cramped xD

[trishabooms]

I liked this, it would be good to see more.

[insane_songbird]

thanks! I'll see if the muse will let me. :)

[stjra]

OMG, Please let this be the sneak peak to a full length fic. I've fallen in love with this 2 already and really need more of this developing dynamic! :D

Great snippet, sit well on it's own, but draws you quickly and fully into their world so that you really, really want more.

[insane_songbird]

:) thank you! It's forming in my head... i just need the time and muse to write it.