Comments | insane_songbird: No Light Without Darkness 7/7

insane_songbird

No Light Without Darkness 7/7

Feb 03, 2009 23:28

May 17th, 1am
The Ambassador's Hotel
Kansas City, Kansas

Sam was flying up the steps as fast as his long legs could possibly carry him. He was glad to be such a tall guy for he was still taking three steps at once covering a lot of ground on the way. But he was already panting like a drowning man and a layer of sweat covered his body making ( Read more... )

sam winchester, supernatural, no light without darkness, dean winchester, fanfiction

Comments 9

mangacat201 February 3 2009, 22:51:11 UTC

It's finished... holy hell, it's finished again. And you did it!! You wrote some of the coolest fast-paced action scenes, and you deserve comments thrown your way!!!
Cat

lalablue February 4 2009, 01:35:24 UTC

Actually... not revealing the puppet master was a good call. Allows for sequels. =)

Very well done. Intriguing, action filled, spot on dialog and lot of hurt!Dean. I especially liked Dean's entrance to the pool and I really loved Sam's realizations in the earlier chapter when he figured out that Dean was notDean.

insane_songbird February 4 2009, 21:57:25 UTC

Thank you for agreeing with my decision, that makes me really happy *g* And I really have to flush from all the praise. Hach, the pool... It just had to be *sigh* the picture of Dean in midair over the dark water was stuck in my head. I really have a Hurt!Dean thing going and it's sooo good. Yeah, Sam's mental murderous facepalm moment was a good one as well... poor boy.
Thank you soooo much for sticking around until the very (hopefully not bitter) end, your comments really kept me going here and I can only *hug* you really tight for it.
luv, Birdie

leenys April 18 2009, 22:18:37 UTC

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Looking for the master list to save...

insane_songbird April 19 2009, 03:18:53 UTC

Thsnkd, I'm glad you like it. Hugs *birdie*

d0kt0ravalanche April 19 2009, 03:36:55 UTC

Very well done! For not being a native English speaker, you have a pretty darn broad vocabulary, dear! Kudos to you for a very entertaining story.

insane_songbird April 19 2009, 07:30:35 UTC

Thank you very much! I, glad you liked it (and my vocabulary)
*hugs* Birdie

amazing!! ext_789405 September 14 2011, 19:18:25 UTC

Aah! this story is amazing!! it's one of the best i've read in a while. a lot of great action and a great storyline. you captured their personalities very well!
and don't we all love a little hurt-dean? :p

Re: amazing!! insane_songbird September 15 2011, 16:14:22 UTC

hahaha. Hurt!Dean is my favorite! ^^
I'm so happy you liked it! It's my very first fic I ever wrote in this fandom... that's been a while ago :)