BEN AND DEAN: scene six

Mar 19, 2007 07:33

Hi, everybody!

New scene featuring my OTP, this time NC-17. This is the one where the supernatural intrudes on the boys' lives (so my apologies to the four of you who voted NO! - and only NO! - in my poll). As always, I owe many thanks. To monkiedude for helping me figure out who Ben was; to janissa11 for suggesting this pairing when I was moping over Ben and ( Read more... )

supernatural, sunshine state, fic, otp, supernatural_fic_my

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stele3 March 19 2007, 16:36:56 UTC
Awwwww. *pets them*

Ben can't resist hurt!Dean anymore than we can.

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innie_darling March 19 2007, 22:53:35 UTC
Ben loves hurt!Dean, it's true, but he loves happy!Dean the most. He does his best to make sure happy!Dean is always around.

Thanks!

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tikiaceae March 19 2007, 16:45:50 UTC
Very very cool. I'm really loving this OTP of yours. *g*

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innie_darling March 19 2007, 22:54:20 UTC
Thanks so very much! I'm quite fond of them too!

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elucreh March 19 2007, 16:55:03 UTC
Wow.

Oh, wow.

That just hit me, right in the gut...what the wings did to Dean, and how it affected Ben to have Dean changed, and...just ow and wow and...

DUDE.

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innie_darling March 19 2007, 22:56:56 UTC
That just hit me, right in the gut...what the wings did to Dean, and how it affected Ben to have Dean changed YES. I love wingfic, and I'd intended to write something about the utter, insane, over-the-top hotness of Ben/Dean-with-wings. But these two boys keep surprising me. In scene two, I didn't expect Ben to get so angry, and here, I didn't expect Dean to be so miserable. But they were, and I'm very glad I didn't force anything.

I love them. Thanks so much for reading!

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dotfic March 20 2007, 00:06:52 UTC
Oh, dayum, that was beautiful. Ben's reactions to, and observations on Dean are heartrending, from how flummoxed he is that Dean told his father about them, to Ben having to witness Dean in this state. And then the ritual to restore him hurts Dean further, and Ben has to endure that, too.

This was a whole lot of Oh, Ben and Oh, Dean for me. :)

Ben tells Dean "love you" (and not "I love you" which I think means something) twice, and Dean doesn't say I love you back, but his love for Ben is clearly there anyway. Also, I like how you thought out Dean's predicament, the caught between elementals, what a cool way to give Dean wings.

::sigh:: OTP.

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innie_darling March 21 2007, 12:40:59 UTC
And then the ritual to restore him hurts Dean further, and Ben has to endure that, too. Ben just hates it, being so helpless - nothing in his life has prepared him to stand by and watch someone be hurt.

Ben tells Dean "love you" (and not "I love you" which I think means something) twice, and Dean doesn't say I love you back, but his love for Ben is clearly there anyway. Dean is . . . skittish about the words, but he makes sure Ben knows. As for the way Ben says it, I think it's what Dean will let him get away with. Less formal, less of a pronouncement; just them, can be passed off as a joke, all of which Ben knows, but now he likes the intimacy of it, like this phrasing is theirs alone.

Also, I like how you thought out Dean's predicament, the caught between elementals, what a cool way to give Dean wings. Yay! Thanks!

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gekizetsu March 20 2007, 00:39:02 UTC
YAY DEAN AND BEN! <3

Okay, a critter that can move between the elements = FTW. And man, I love the way you describe Dean in all these tales. Guh. Okay, does John know Ben is a friend or a boyfriend?

::imagines John stalking Ben:: XD

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innie_darling March 21 2007, 12:43:31 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked this! Your wingfic is still a happy place for me, since I poo'd all over my own wingfic. I am so aggravating sometimes.

And man, I love the way you describe Dean in all these tales. It's . . . Dean; he is lovely.

Okay, does John know Ben is a friend or a boyfriend? Not just friend, not just boyfriend, but THE boyfriend. The end.

::imagines John stalking Ben:: XD Dean "knows [his] dad better'n anyone," remember? Oh, John! You're the size of a bear! You don't do stealthy!

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