Comments | innie_darling: But They Had Good Times (Community, gen, PG-13) for picfor1000!

innie_darling

But They Had Good Times (Community, gen, PG-13) for picfor1000!

Jan 24, 2010 12:34

Hi, everybody! Here's my story for picfor1000, which is one of my favorite challenges. I decided this year to write a story for Community, which is one of the three shows I refuse to miss this season (the other two are Supernatural and Chuck - Better Off Ted would be on the list, but it looks like it's circling the drain even as we speak [boo, ABC!]). ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

bergann January 24 2010, 17:58:09 UTC

This was lovely! :D

innie_darling January 26 2010, 22:15:10 UTC

Thank you so much!

sparky77 January 24 2010, 18:03:21 UTC

This was perfect. You got the humor of Community down exactly. So much love!

innie_darling January 26 2010, 22:15:55 UTC

Hee, icon love! And thank you so much - I really admire how each character on the show has a distinctive voice, and I didn't think I could get close.

oliveoyl January 24 2010, 18:04:17 UTC

There's so much I adore about this--the title, your Britta POV, how everyone keeps showing up, Troy's reaction to trans fats, the dean and the Human Being, and above all just how adorable and in-character it is. I say heartily, with Shirley: oh, that's nice!

innie_darling January 26 2010, 22:17:41 UTC

They do seem . . . oddly drawn to each other, don't they? I'm so pleased you liked the way everyone joined in, and thank you for saying it felt in character. Plus bonus Shirley in your feedback!

jus_de_pomme January 24 2010, 19:48:25 UTC

Troy shrugged his confusion, so Annie elaborated. "They have trans fats in them!"

"WHAT?!?" Troy shrieked. "They make you fat and they could make me have . . . girl parts?"

Ahahahahaha. I burst out laughing, nearly sprayed juice all over my screen. So spot on.

innie_darling January 26 2010, 22:18:28 UTC

Hee, oh Troy, you do seem to be pretty obsessed with what you've got! Glad the line worked for you!

scintilla10 January 24 2010, 21:08:37 UTC

If you added Leverage, your list of don't miss tv would look suspiciously like mine! ;)

This was great! I love your Britta voice; you've really caught her blend of cynicism and affection for others.

"You're always congregating! Photogenically!" HEE. And may they continue to do so evermore.

innie_darling January 26 2010, 22:20:44 UTC

I really like Leverage (and Psych and White Collar), but I don't LOVE them the way I love those four other shows - to the point where I'm unhappy if I miss an episode.

I'm so pleased that the Britta voice here worked for you - for some reason, it was always very clear that she would be driving this story, even though Shirley's my faaaaavorite. Thank you so much!