Beauty and the Beast: A Frakked-Up Fairy Tale

[innibis]

Title: Beauty and the Beast (2/2)
Author: innibis
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 9,376
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Genre: Completely AU
Disclaimer: I am not RDM or any of his cohorts. I do not lay claim to BSG in any way, shape or form; especially the finale.

A/N: Ah, workerbee73, a beta who can be trusted to see the beauty in the beast.

Part I

Comments

[thegreenkitty]

You did it!! Bravo for walking that fine line necessitated by edge play and making it plausible, fantastically well written, and super hot!

(my academy edge fic that i started after our chatter about needing some rough k/l ficporn will never live up to the standards you've set with this one, my dear!!)

[innibis]

I actually wrote the sex scene months ago and then showed it to Bee. It didn't fit at all in the story I was writing at the time (and am now back to writing), so we brainstormed, figured it would work in a Beauty and the Beast setting and then I built the story around it.

I'm really glad you approve of it. And I'm sure your story will be great.

[cherylad]

Wow. This was just totally awesome. I love them alerting the fleet and unplugging before the cylons could destroy them, but the fleet brass still almost finding a way to completely frak themselves!!

Loving the turn of Lee as the outcast and Kara being sent out to help and then her standing up to them for him.

Just great!

Oh, and yeah, yums for the not quite vanilla version of sex for them - this has been coming up lately since the discusson and it is a hawt change!

[innibis]

Thank you very much.:)

This plot was a fun one to play with. I do love what ifs.

I'm glad the not quite vanilla sex worked for you.:)

[eugis]

OMG this is so fantastic! I loved them in the castle, like if it were their own little world. And Kara rescuing Lee... so hot! Bondage sex, knife porn!!! Awesome. :)

[innibis]

Thanks:)

I just wish I could have sent them off to their own castle in the woods in canon, poor dears.

And I'm glad the sex worked for you. Felt like mixing it up a bit.

[lapsedprof]

Hooray! Another fraked-up fairy tale. I cannot express what a sheer pleasure it was to find this at the end of a truly god awful work day. To be pulled along into another brilliantly woven fairy tale K/L tapestry was the best kind of medicine for what ails me.
Just off the top of my head, the things I loved: "bad" Lee - vulnerable, hard, bad, misunderstood. Guh. Black Market redeemed - generous of spirit and fun. And Kendra too - way to spread the love. The wish fulfillment fantasy of the two of them hiding away in their jungle castle. The slow build between them - held hands, planning an op while playing footsie (those entwined ankles in the pool - nice!), artful callbacks (grenades!), banter, trust issues, all culminating in edgy sex.
Sighs with pleasure and offers heartfelt thanks!

[innibis]

Hi!

I love Kendra for no particular reason, and had so much fun turning the blackmarket and Phelan and Shevon into people Lee interacted with on a regular, non-hostile basis. This was a story where I had even more fun playing with plot and setting then I did playing with pilots.

Nice to hear from you again. I hope that your day goes better tomorrow. Thank you for your great feedback.:)

[lapsedprof]

Hi

[innibis]

One of the things I never liked about BSG was how Puritanical it was. I mean, it was the end of the worlds, the human race is on the brink of extinction and the writers were making points about how bad drugs and booze and sex were. I know they thought they were edgy showing it, but it was always with this thinly disguised veneer of disapproval. They did a bad job with Black Market, showing it as a place where only bad things happened as opposed to a place where normal people might be able to find some comfort or escape, or a pice of chocolate. But then they always did a bad job on anything that wasn't focused on the elites of the fleet

[rayruz]

*Swoon* Oh hon, I loved this! I love the end of it, of Kara swooping in to save him and kicking some serious ass and the amazing amazing sexings that followed. I loved the story too, the good use of underused characters in a new way. You need to write more! I love your fairytales!

[innibis]

Thanks very much, my dear. I'm glad you liked it. Part of the fun of saving the worlds is that all those characters had lives somewhere else, and you can turn them into the person they could have been.