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Six Swans: A Frakked-Up Fairy Tale

Jun 28, 2009 19:05

Title: Six Swans (3/3)
Author: innibis
Rating: R
Word Count: 7,792
Pairing: Kara/Lee, Karl/Sharon
Genre: Completely AU
Disclaimer: I am not RDM. Nor am I a brother of the Grimms.

A/N: Many thanks to my beta, workerbee73, smoother of ruffled feathers.

Part I
Part II

( Six Swans )

fairytale, bsgfic, kara/lee

Comments 43

somewhereapart June 29 2009, 04:17:24 UTC

*sigh* I loved this, all of this, from beginning to end. I got all mushy over their wedding, not gonna lie. And of course her first word was Lee -- and the next was a critique of his battle skills. lol

Awesome, awesome work, as always. Can't wait to see what you do next!

innibis June 29 2009, 12:17:14 UTC

Our girl's got her priorities straight.:)

Thank you very much.:)

canadiangirl_86 June 29 2009, 04:45:44 UTC

This was so lovely!

I honestly didn't expect to like it because it is completely AU, but I loved it. So beautifully original!

innibis June 29 2009, 12:22:00 UTC

Yes, this is defiantly AU - I dismantled the fairy tale and disregarded BSG canon. I do like getting them out of that bleak universe though.KInd of give them a fighting chance.

thank you for reading it anyway. I'm very glad that you liked it.

bonita_chica71 June 29 2009, 06:18:56 UTC

Aww! This was so beautiful. What a perfect ending! :)

innibis June 29 2009, 12:22:39 UTC

Thank you so much for reading.:)

rayruz June 29 2009, 11:02:30 UTC

I love love love your fairy tales, hon. This one was especially fantastic. Please tell me that there are going to be more of these because I just cannot get enough.

innibis June 29 2009, 12:23:53 UTC

Thank you very much, that is a very kind thing to say.

We'll see where inspiration strikes next.:)

helikedmyshoes June 29 2009, 15:12:31 UTC

I absolutely adored this! I loved how Kara was still so Kara but she had to be herself without using any words, and you captured her so well. And Lee and his duty and how he couldn't help himself, he just had to keep coming back to her. I loved the proposal scene, it was so moving how Kara conveyed herself without words. Such a beautiful story, with Karl and Sharon thrown in for good measure! I thoroughly enjoyed this, your way of storytelling is so engaging and magical.

innibis June 29 2009, 15:59:33 UTC

I'm glad you liked it, and so pleased that Kara still comes across as Kara, even without words. And Lee can't say no to Kara, she bends his world and his will every single time, poor boy. He just loves her that much.

The proposal scene is Bee's favorite.:)

Thank you very much for the lovely comment.