Chiraptora, Ch. 2

[innerbrat]

I'm late at work! Not because I feel compelled to finish a particular job (though I have been working as well), but because I didn't trust myself to write Chiraptora at home this evening, and I wanted to get this installment posted

Comments

[lienne]

I've mentioned that this is awesome, and now I am going to mention it again: this is awesome. I really like the idea of living in the interstice between two identities, and I really like your voice for Dinah.

[requiem2adream]

This continues to be awesome. Despite how I feel about that scene in BoP I am adoring this. I love your Dinah and Bruce.

[skellingtonjon]

Bravo, old thing- I like this more than the first part, I think- not sure if it's because you lured us in so well that we now care about the characters that little bit more, or if it's because your own little AU is so well-drawn, or...

Oh, I dunno. Well done, more please, and I'm sorry if that makes me sound like a deranged fanboy with a bad grasp of grammar.

:)

[the_croupier]

Building nicely on the promise of the first part! I like the attention to detail, and the humane confidence in Dinah's voice. She sounds like someone who could end up with Bruce and handle all that enormous baggage he brings with him. Also like the fact that her mother remains a presence, even if just an implicit one.

[innerbrat]

It was the fault of continuity, not anything else, but the way in which Dinah Drake was short changed by the post-crisis continuity makes me sad. Expect more of her.