Comments | innana88: Brigits Flame JFF Entry - July 2012 - Week 3

innana88

Brigits Flame JFF Entry - July 2012 - Week 3 - "Scale"

Jul 22, 2012 16:56

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writingmoments July 24 2012, 12:05:37 UTC

Such a difficult trap to be stuck in.

I hope the new wall colors usher in a new beginning for her.

Your imagery is very well done!

innana88 July 28 2012, 13:15:37 UTC

Indeed it is. The new colors along with the absence of mirrors should be healing. :) Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!

starriheavens July 29 2012, 09:06:07 UTC

Hello Innana~ I am your editor yet again and so again I would like to apologize for doing my edits at the very last minute (I’m good at this time management thing ( ... )

innana88 August 2 2012, 16:40:08 UTC

I really like your suggestions about word-choice and the details. I'll definitely work those in (or out ( ... )

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innana88 August 2 2012, 22:10:30 UTC

I like your odd notes! :)

Some great points for me to think about. Thank you!

Just an FYI, I didn't request a grammar edit this time. This was mostly because I wrote the damn thing in twenty minutes or so, didn't have time to proofread, and didn't want an editor breaking zirself or wasting time trying to help me correct errors that are glaringly obvious. Unfortunately, I don't think I successfully prevented this. :-/ I learned a thing or two, though, so thanks! Hope you find your grammar book soon!