Fic: "Shadowplay" (BSG)

[inlovewithnight]

For sionnain. Leoben and Kara, pre-s3. I hope you like it, darling. ::nervous::

Warning for, you know, psychological twistiness. Many thank-yous to likeadeuce for beta'ing.

Comments

[resolute]

Uffhh.

Um.

Hell yeah.

That was, um. twisty and dark and great and I loved it. Thank you!

[inlovewithnight]

Thanks! Leoben is very twisty and had a lot to say...

[inathunderstorm]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

Um.

Um.

That hit about 439687439867349867348993486739831 kinks I have. That number. TIMES A MILLION. A MILLION TIMES A MILLION.

I don't think I could love this more. It's so deliciously subversive and twisting and mindfuckery and just. yes. YES. ::flails::

I loveses you. ::beams::

THANK YOU OMG.

[inlovewithnight]

::blushflail:: I loveses you too. :) And I'm glad it worked for you! Yay!

(And now I think I'm starting to really like Leoben. Especially if he'll be all talky for me.)

[dknightshade]

Ooooooh. Very spooky and well done. I like the framing of starting each scene with the number of days. You managed to capture a lot of the creepiness between the two of them and Leoben's twisted POV. Beautifully done!

[inlovewithnight]

Thank you!

[indigo419]

OMGs. That was really scary. I would tell you I loved it, but I'm too unnerved.

*shivers*

(it was really good creepy!)

[inlovewithnight]

::gives you a night light:: Thanks. :)

[onlyonechoice]

Wow.

And a scold's bridle too.

*gets a delicious, wicked, naughty little thrill* Thanks to sionnain for the rec!

[inlovewithnight]

Thanks!