Comments | inlovewithnight: Fic: "Cross-training" (BSG)

inlovewithnight

Fic: "Cross-training" (BSG)

Nov 08, 2006 12:23

For asta77, who was bemoaning the lack of Lee-Helo gym fic post-"Torn." The boys refused to slash for me (jerks), but they're all friendly and banter-y and hopefully that satisfies.

Spoilers through "Torn," totally gratuitous use of a shower. Canon relationships. Thanks to romanticalgirl for beta'ing the effects of writing-while-drinking out of it ( Read more... )

fic_2006, fic_bsg

Comments 37

sabaceanbabe November 8 2006, 18:45:43 UTC

"Frak you, Agathon."

"You'll have to talk to Sharon, sir."

Hee! :D

"Prove the bastards wrong" only works for a limited number of bastards.

*giggle*

Love the friendship you've depicted here. They both need friends, and Helo is really this big, protective zen master this season, so...

inlovewithnight November 8 2006, 18:49:37 UTC

I really *like the idea of them being friends. It makes me all happy and I make these squeaky noises like a silly little fangirl.

Apparently in the podcast, Ron said that the gym scene doesn't mean anything, and they didn't intend for them to be friends. WHATEVER, RON. ::prefers the delusion::

sabaceanbabe November 8 2006, 18:53:49 UTC

WHATEVER, RON is right! The man just doesn't seem to understand that when it leaves the page and gets to the screen, it takes on a life of its own. Not to mention the fact that we've already had a bit of Helo-Lee bonding over Kara scene in Scar...

jebbypal November 8 2006, 18:50:13 UTC

Hee, very cute. And very in character. good job.

inlovewithnight November 8 2006, 18:52:02 UTC

Thanks. They're awfully cute. And, you know, pretty.

jebbypal November 8 2006, 19:16:25 UTC

hmm, when i watched last week, it seemed like helo was skinnier than last season. but maybe that's just because I don't remember ever seeing him fully dressed in a uniform before.

inathunderstorm November 8 2006, 19:29:37 UTC

Wow, you really do nail the voices. now where is the nailing with the other things...?

I loved this! This line especially:

"Yeah." Helo smiles with pure delight and pride, and if they weren't talking about putting a Cylon behind the controls of a military asset, Lee would smile back.

Ah, the little things that live between them. *sighs*

Very nicely done. You win today!!

inlovewithnight November 9 2006, 04:36:37 UTC

Thank you! ::dances you::

(The nailing with the other things is...um, well, it's still living in my head. Yes. After I get this stupid evil paper turned in on Friday, maybe I can dig into it. Sigh.)

indigo419 November 8 2006, 20:24:49 UTC

"Not safe to jump a battlestar into atmo, either," Lee points out, not bothering to protest or sigh as Helo moves around to the head of the bench and cups his hands under the bar, spotting whether Lee wants it or not.

*sighs* Oh, to be that bar. Thank you for this! What does RDM know from friendship, anyway? ;0)

inlovewithnight November 9 2006, 04:37:12 UTC

Thanks for commenting, glad you liked it! :)

Mmm, Helo!hands...

romanticalgirl November 8 2006, 21:08:54 UTC

Pretty sweaty boys! And no one yet has commented that they're NAKED IN THE SHOWER TOGETHER. What is wrong with fandom, I ask you?

inlovewithnight November 9 2006, 04:37:43 UTC

I'm shocked by that as well! SHOWER. COME ON, PEOPLE.

Clearly, there has to be flat-out shower!porn. Clearly. ::pokes muse::

romanticalgirl November 9 2006, 19:27:33 UTC

I KNOW! There's a SHOWER, people. There should be POOOOOOORN!