[fic] NaNo07 novel, currently untitled (2/?) (v1.0)

[inkntendinitis]

Fandom: Naruto
Genre: AU, gen, friendship, sports (?)
Rating: PG13 for language
Wordcount: 3832 for this chapter

Disclaimer: I do not own in part or full any aspect of Naruto. This is the property of Kishimoto Masashi-sensei, his relevant partners and subsidiaries. I do own all original aspects of this fanfiction including but not limited to original

Comments

[atom0001]

You're really pushing the concept of friendship in this story and I'm loving it so far.

I think you've got all the characters down. Most of them are perfect. Sasuke is lighthearted, but still maintains a quiet demeanor while insulting Naruto. I think that's exactly how Sasuke would be had his past been not-so-tragic.

Hinata unsureness is just how she is, followed suit by Naruto loud encouragement. It was perfect.

As for the title, I can't really think of any either, I would suggest just finishing up the story and then determining a title from there, especially since you're not 100% sure how the story will turn out. It's better than allow your creativity to flow completely and then determine the title from the outcome, rather than determine a title and constantly work towards that title.

[caitlin_chan]

Aww, thanks. ^__^

Yay, acceptable characterization! :D

I don't really want a title so I can work at following it or something, I just want a title so I can say I have a title. XDD

Thanks for your lovely comments. ^^

[atom0001]

Now I'm just waiting for Lee and Neji as both of them have pretty distinct personality traits.

I guess they're going to be Grade 11 varsity hockey players. And Neji is Captain?

[inkntendinitis]

Somewhere in the next chapter or two, for sure, I think.

Eh, something like that. I haven't though about Neji being captain, but it would certainly provide a reason for his superiority complex since he can't have learnt all the Main Family techniques in this. XD Thanks!! <3<3<3<3<3<3