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premonitioner October 21 2009, 20:28:38 UTC
*_______* only read three paragraphs but eeeeeeeeeee heechul why are you so cute

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premonitioner October 21 2009, 20:43:30 UTC
He picked up some of the dust and let it fall through his fingers, then took his knife from his boot and mimed cutting his skin and spreading it over the ground. "Eh?" said Heechul, and then, "oh my fucking god! It's red because of -- that's disgusting."

i agree with heechul. ew ew ew ew ew.

"Give me that," said Heechul, snapping only because he was still shaken, and snatched the bottle from Hankyung's hands. He cleaned the wound carefully, using it as some sort of therapy. By the time he wrapped the dressing around Hankyung's arm, his trembling was minimal.

this is beautiful. i just....idek.

Heechul was not new to sex, but this was different. This time, it wasn't about sheer satisfaction. This time, every touch made his stomach drop, every kiss made his chest ache, every thrust made him lightheaded. Afterwards, he curled into Hankyung, sticky and hot, and felt the heat of the day fall away around them. Hankyung murmured against his hair, something which sound soppy and happy; something Heechul kind of agreed with.hello TWOO ( ... )

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black_goose October 23 2009, 16:56:43 UTC
"Heechul, why are you so cute" is not something I ever thought I'd read.

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premonitioner October 23 2009, 16:58:14 UTC
well, he can be....if you're into that sort of thing...

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kayevelyn October 21 2009, 20:37:15 UTC
Awww poor Hankyung. I love that backstory is creeping up and we don't have any words to really explain it. Good chapter. Heechul is really coming into his own here. Yay character development!

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black_goose October 23 2009, 16:57:23 UTC
Yay character development that will go nowhere :|

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kayevelyn October 23 2009, 20:53:59 UTC
Maybe you should write more :|

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sykkea9009 October 21 2009, 20:43:03 UTC
You win so hard it hurts.
\o////////////

...other than that, I am speechless xD

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black_goose October 23 2009, 17:43:37 UTC
ahahaha thank you ♥!

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suzukisan October 21 2009, 20:55:51 UTC
finally! \o///////////

the ending ;____; kgjfdhudhdlhsjskdrjds the way they made love and all was so cute, too cute, so loveable and dfkjhdrujrhslrjsl ;______________________;

the people who attacked they, deserve to die, though. :D y/y?

it's almost the end of the fic... i need the last chapter. T_T what will happen? will heechul comeback to the past? but and hankyung? :l don't make them suffer, ok. ok.

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black_goose October 24 2009, 08:42:32 UTC
I'd say they deserve to die >:\ fuckers. I wrote them and even I didn't feel sorry when they died XD

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umberela October 21 2009, 21:11:03 UTC
;________;

ooooh ilusfm, Nice Laura. I am sorry for always pushing your buttons except i'm really not :|

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black_goose October 24 2009, 08:43:13 UTC
you're mean to me.

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