[Fanfiction] That's Why

[inkcharm_666]

Author: inkcharm_666 
Title: That's Why
Warnings: one-shot, m/m, PWP, slightly kinky, some minor language. LOTS OF SEX.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Moonchild does not belong to me, nor do its characters or anything else related to the movie. I make no profit out of this story, it is written merely for fun and entertainment of other fans. Yadda yadda.

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Comments

[dohai_love]

Mind my language, but:

THAT. WAS. FUCKING. AMAZINGLY. EPIC.

My brain can't think of any other words right now :DDDDD

[inkcharm_666]

I consider the death of your brain a compliment then xD Thank you so much. *amused*

[dohai_love]

lol, you're very welcome! *reads again* <3333

[tsuki_626]

woh, that one makes you tingle all over. 0.0 in a thoroughly good and nasty way of course. 8)

i do not think i needs must elaborate upon that.

lol, my god woman, no fucking wonder you are tired after writing this piece of splendiferric erotica.! 8D

please excuse my lapse in english. XP

[inkcharm_666]

xD I'm glad you liked this so well. When I posted it I was so tired I could barely see the screen so I really wasn't sure if it was any good.

[tsuki_626]

well, my dear, if you look at all of the other comments on this page, i think one must conclude that you hit right on the money with this one. i would call it tantalizing, as it leads one on to a higher level of "interest" without direct contact. in other words, the reader finds her/himself in exactly the same boat as Sho, totally at the mercy of Kei/Inky. kudos indeed! ^v^)bb

[inkcharm_666]

I was actually pondering following it up with Kei taking Sho, but figured tthis would work better. The whole kinda naughty "I can get you off without a touch" thing struck me as as interesting.
At my mercy? Muahaha!

[b_sim]

This. Is. Fucking. BRILLIANT.

Kei's first line already had me grinning like a moron and then the whining and griping and complaining from Sho had me lol-ing. And TEH SMEX. Oh God, this thing is just absolutely brilliant. ♥

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you so much. I had a lot of fun writing the light-hearted beginning only to let things tumble into sweat-slick, steamy smut xD

[themyrf]

Kei is one sneaky sexy bastard ♥

Oh, and note to self, do not try to hold a cup of anything liquid in your hand while reading porn. Seriously. I almost spilled three times my tea because I couldn't tear off my eyes from the text to put the cup down..

[inkcharm_666]

I would have very much liked to see that happen xD *hugs*

[lovelydagger23]

THAT. WAS. THE. BEST. FUCKING. THING. I'VE. READ. IN. FUCKING. FOREVER.

I have the jitters. That was hot...and something I couldn't write if I wanted to in a million years. *Fans self* Wooo!

I think reading that made my fever get higher...I don't care. *reads it again* ^///^

[inkcharm_666]

Wow, I'm really glad to have had such an impact on you with this fic xD