[Fanfiction] A Million Sparks

[inkcharm_666]

Author: inkcharm_666 
Title: A Million Sparks
Warnings: one-shot, fluff
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Moonchild does not belong to me, nor do its characters or anything else related to the movie. I make no profit out of this story, it is written merely for fun and entertainment of other fans. Yadda yadda.
Notes: Dedicated to plain_ornament - thank you for the colours.

Summary: Kei

Comments

[themyrf]

♥

[inkcharm_666]

<3

[write_my_dreams]

I really really liked this. I liked how you'd talk about the fireworks in one paragraph and then a little paragraph with Sho and Kei. It really helped the scene unfold, and I loved all the imagery and symbolism you used for the fireworks.

This line was my favorite since it's so true, and really beautiful. "Kei's smile was like life; beautiful because it was so fleeting; radiant because it died so quickly."

Great story! Keep writing :)

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you liked the way I chose to progress the story style-wise.

[write_my_dreams]

You're welcome. It was very well done

[faded_poetry]

so vibrant, i can picture the fireworks already and the atmosphere.
<3

[inkcharm_666]

I think it's so vibrant because I actually was there... this is a real firework ^^ Only it was raining... but that's creative freedom right there xD

[silveryxdark]

Oh. ♥ That was truly beautiful.

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you :)

[lovelydagger23]

*Sighs in awe* So pretty.

[inkcharm_666]

Thank you!