[Fanfiction] Don't (Moonchild)

Dec 09, 2009 23:22

Title: Don't
Fandom: Moonchild
Warnings: angst
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: The movie Moonchild and its characters are sole property of their creators. I have no rights to them whatsoever. This story merely borrows them. I make no money with this story.
Notes: This is for riverofnara . I know it's very late, and I am sorry. I hope, however, that it was worth the ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, status: one-shot, fandom: moonchild, character: sho, character: kei, rating: pg-13, genre: angst, pairing: keixsho

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lovelydagger23 December 10 2009, 00:14:25 UTC
*Sniffs and wipes my only tear away*

This was so sad, but so wonderfully written. I think I'll read it again.

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inkcharm_666 December 11 2009, 07:49:39 UTC
*hugs* Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Sorry for making you tear up.

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lovelydagger23 December 11 2009, 07:56:11 UTC
It's alright...it's hard for me to cry and when I can I'm glad...yeah I know that sounds weird but it's true. XD

*Hugs*

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inkcharm_666 December 11 2009, 08:01:34 UTC
I know what you mean. Sometimes it just feels good if we can let the tears out, and personally I often need something to MAKE me cry as well. Usually, listening to Roentgen is all it takes for me. Ahem.

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riverofnara December 10 2009, 02:16:04 UTC
-squeaks and flails-

Seriously, one of the best birthday presents EVER. How the emotion just drenches the entire piece and it really, really gets to you. I love that everything needed to be said is unsaid, because that's their relationship - this piece captures everything so perfectly and guh <3 <3 Really, really could go on and on but it'd mostly just being flailing and squealing and stuff cause GUH.

Beautiful job, really. A wonderful gift I can always look back on. :) And it didn't cost you a single dime!

<3

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inkcharm_666 December 11 2009, 07:52:31 UTC
It actually cost me half my hair. It took me SO long to find the right angle on Sho for this ficlet, I swear I tore out many a hair over him. xD

You know I wouldn't mind to see you squealing and flailing all over the place *amused*

But I'm so very glad you liked this. *hugs tightly* I was worried it wouldn't be appropriate.

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annui December 10 2009, 02:16:57 UTC
Beautiful...the closeness before kissing, yet it never happened was hurting my heart...I ll read it again when its rain X)

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inkcharm_666 December 11 2009, 07:59:44 UTC
I had a hard time deciding on that. In the beginning I meant to give them a kiss, but then I felt that denying them this, making them miss this chance, would suit the story better.

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silveryxdark December 10 2009, 03:10:54 UTC
It's so heartbreakingly beautiful. There's so much meaning and emotion to all of this, and I love that the only dialogue was at the beginning and the end. It was very well-written.

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inkcharm_666 December 11 2009, 08:00:34 UTC
I'm glad you liked it so much, especially that there is only the dialogue in the beginning and the end. That was kind of the most important point while writing, and I wasn't sure if it came out well.

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belabellissima December 10 2009, 06:18:24 UTC
Wow ;____;

I haven't read Moonchild fic in soo long, and this is one of the saddest I've read! Nice job! I suddenly feel the need to re-watch this movie ;)

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inkcharm_666 December 11 2009, 08:12:33 UTC
I'm glad that I could make you want to watch the movie again. I write mainly Moonchild fic, even though I seem to be the only one at times xD With the movie so old, I guess the lack of new stuff is not that surprising. I'm far too late xD

Thanks for commenting!

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