Naruto: Knickers

[graychalk]

Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Shikamaru/Temari
Rating/Status: PG-13 for language and implications / 431 words, complete
Timeline: Open for anytime when they're older. No spoilers.
Summary: She was worried about her hair, only to find that her knickers had betrayed her.

Author's Notes: So I wrote two ShikaTema drabbles with absolutely no dialogue only to end

Comments

[_acerbitas_]

O.O I loved it. You are marvelous at dialogue, and conveying what's happening perfectly through dialogue. I loved it when Gaara came in. That was classic. Loved it so much!

[graychalk]

Ahh thank you so much! You're so sweet about my writing. <3 I'm glad you liked the Gaara part because I kept wondering if he should be angry...but I went this way in the end. ^_^

[_acerbitas_]

Nope, I think it was funnier that he just kinda went all neutral. That's so like him! I think it was quite in character.

[graychalk]

I wish I could take this further...except I'm not sure how to do it without ruining it. ^^; Thank you very much- I'm so happy you liked it! :)

Btw, your icon is awesome...lol. I can't stop staring at it. ^_^

[hakinechan]

Haha! That was lovely! xD So many implications... >D

[graychalk]

Heee....thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. ^__^

[katterrena]

Dialogue is the best! Love it, love it, love it!!!!

Most of the time people portray as quiter type individuals. I don't think that they are as silent as some of these fics describe them as, but I'll admit that they aren't as verbose as I'd like them to be. I'm a dialogue freak so I love it when people write things like this, pure dialogue, in Shika/Tema fics. Thank you so much for writing a dialogue driven fic!!!!

Much love! Great stuff!

[chibi_ai]

An automatic fave! ^__^ Great job!