FFX-2: Not Eligible

[not_cynical]

Title: Not Eligible
Rating: G
Word Count: 246
Characters: Baralai, Gippal, Paine, Nooj
Notes: This is oooooooold. Like "early last year while I was still trying to work out the characters" old, which is why the POV is... Well, it isn't. I'm not sure I like it, but I don't remember where I was going with it so I suppose I have to leave it be! [

Comments

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[kunstarniki]

I don't think you need worry about forgetting where you were going with this. It stands quite well by itself. This is a a very enjoyable glimpse into the characters of the four which adds an important piece to the image we have of them. Thank you for finally posting it. ;)

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[not_cynical]

Oh, thank you very much! I'm very happy you like it and think it's so effective! :D

[owlmoose]

I agree with Ikon, this is a great snippet. I think Baralai's quiet reaction to Nooj's statement may be the nicest part -- subtle, but effective. Thanks for posting it!

[not_cynical]

R-really? Thank you Ms Owlmoose! I'm really glad you like it! :D (I'm not surprised Baralai's reaction came out best - he's the one I can actually get my head around easiest.) Thank you for commenting! :D

[solitaryjane]

Wow. Nice!

[not_cynical]

Thank you! I'm happy you think so! :D