FFX: Belief and Other Foolish Things

[not_cynical]

Title: Belief and Other Foolish Things
Word Count: 468
Rating: G
Characters: Auron, Jecht, Braska, Yuna mentioned
Notes: Written for pyre_flies. I think I used up most of my FFX mojo on ff_exchange. *dies*

Comments

[muggy_mountain]

I like the conciseness of this --you give us just enough to tell the story and it reaches a zenith o' heartbreak in the second part. Comparing to Jecht to a child is very apt; civility can be some sort of domestication and the populace of dream!Zanarkand are rather stunted in their placid, easy little world.

A nitckpick: a few squads of mean I think you mean a few squads of men?

[not_cynical]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :D (Stunted... THAT is a good word for them... *ponders*)

I did! *corrects it* Thanks for pointing it out. :)