[primeval] hunting for the lies (that are obvious) - part one

[iniq_incognito]

Title: hunting for the lies (that are obvious

Comments

[reggietate]

Oooh, great start :-) Love the banter between Nick and Stephen, and the little hints as to what's happened previously, plus sniper!stephen, yay! *runs to part two*

[iniq]

:D I wanted to establish this verse with these hints and references, but now I kind of want to write the timestamp for it. Only, it's all said already, so... XD Damnit.

Sniper!Stephen. *shivers* I love him inappropriately much.
Glad you're enjoying it!

[fredbassett]

Stephen turned on his charm and greeted the man, trying not to look like someone who was carrying a military sniper rifle on his back.

LOL!

I loved this! Very tense and fast moving. The Nick/Stephen interaction was great, and I loved all the gun details.

Stephen is great. He comes over fabulously in this.

[iniq]

Stephen, so inept. I like making him uncomfortable when he has to talk to people.

I'm so glad you like Stephen in this. He was such a worry for me, to get him right the way I wanted him to be.

Guns. ♥ I wish I had reason to go into more details. *g*

[telperion_15]

Eeeeeeee, it's all very exciting! And tense! And there's some really nice characterisation too :) Also, I love the little bits from the creatures pov...

[iniq]

Sniper icon! :D

Creature POV was fun to write. :D
I'm very happy to hear that I got the characters right. (Big worry there, especially over Stephen.)

♥!

[unseen_quill]

Really liking this so far, especially the interaction between Nick and Stephen. :) The way you wrote everything was great, I can visualize everything so easily. I particularly liked the dinosaur POV. :)

I wanted to establish this verse with these hints and references, but now I kind of want to write the timestamp for it. Only, it's all said already, so... XD Damnit.

So, this is the actual beginning of the story and not a sequel/part of a series? Cause I was confused at the past references, lol. But I do like the hints of consequences of previous happenings, especially if Stephen is still a little off because of it. I'd love to read a prequel that detailed that event if you ever write it. :) I like reading people recovering from stuff like that, especially emotionally/mentally as well as physically. :)

[iniq]

Dinosaur POV! :D that was so much fun, because it's so threatening, even just being the animal it is.

This is the actual beginning, yeah. I just wanted to give a backstory, so the verse doesn't start at zero. I want stuff to have happened before that shapes these characters and not like... have canon up till 105 and then diverge from that or something. The story doesn't start there... it starts at least two months ago... only that we never see.

I do want a timestamp... I just need to find a way to write it without repeating everything I've already said about that event. :) I'll get around to it.

Thanks for the lovely comment! ♥

[knitekat]

Great fic. Love the Nick and Stephen interaction, with added Abby.
Eek for Leek and his plans!

[iniq]

I feel bad for not giving Abby a larger part, but then for the plot she wasn't necessary, so I left her at home instead of forcing her to play a part...

I love your icon. :D