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Title: Phoenix Heart (3/?)
Author: infusiion
Rating: G for now.
Genre: Angst
Characters/Pairings: Hermione-centric, Draco/Hermione.
Notes: Originally a oneshot inspired by "The Charge of the Light Brigade", a poem by Alfred Tennyson.

Summary: Hermione feels suffocated by the War that lurks like a storm on their horizon, and finds solace in an

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This just keeps getting more powerful. I can't think of another way to describe it. Sure, other words like intriguing, striking, intense seem to fit, but they're not right. These dreams are intense. I felt a little despairing towards the end of that last one, honestly. What a struggle she has, between her need for self-preservation (no one should be able to blame a 16-year-old for wanting to make it past 25, can they?) and her need to not abandon her friends. Hermione abandoning her friends? It really puts her fears into perspective, because of how uncharacteristic that seems for her.

I'm so glad these chapters keep coming so quickly! :D

[infusiion]

Thanks so much! I find myself wondering what you'll think when I'm writing. You seem to be the standard I've set, hehe.

Hopefully I can keep up the pace I've set. I'm going home tonight so this weekend I hope to get out another chapter or 2. I'm putting plot notes into my phone on the bus on my way to work right now lol. I'm pretty sure I have a general idea of what will happen, up until the end. I need to meet with my HBP DVD and try solidify things. :P

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:) I think you should post it at Hawthorn & Vine. Perhaps it'd get a bit more attention there! (www.dramione.org)

Aha, I do that! Whenever I decide to go sit on a stationary bike at the gym, I bring my phone just in case I make some headway on any of the things I'm working on. :D That and I'm not opposed to leaving myself voicemails while I'm driving to work or wherever it is I'm headed.

Glad you've an idea where it'd headed. That is definitely a good sign! No rush on any of the chapters, really. It was a pleasant surprise to see you updating so quickly.

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I joined Hawthorn and Vine the other day. There are some good fics there. I love how you can summarize Draco and hermione (blushing virgin lulz) in the story summary. I found that extremely helpful. The Draco I want to read sometimes changes.

I considered publishing to H&V, but is it compulsory to have a beta?