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ISS 2012: for iluvrenee

Dec 23, 2012 21:11

Title: Gravitational
Pairing/Focus: Woohyun/Sungyeol
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 3.7k
Summary: The slow pull over coffee, through beaches and across dimensions.

To: iluvrenee
From: Your Secret Santa

( Woohyun thinks that he may have made too flashy an appearance when he emerges out of a female toilet after materialising in one of the cramped pink cubicles. )

pairing: woohyun/sungyeol, iss: 2012, rating: pg-13

Comments 14

galmaegi December 23 2012, 23:00:32 UTC

wooyeol is not a ship i'm into, but i loved this! i love the playful tone and the richness of the world you created, everything from the pills down to the bananas. this was a great line:
Frozen banana bars are now a frighteningly accurate representation of the mess of feelings churning inside Woohyun, mushy and gross and sickeningly sweet.

the part about roy made me go "awww" out loud, too. overall it's really sweet! i'll be waiting to find out who you are~

pressurise January 5 2013, 08:17:16 UTC

thank you..!! ♡ that was the type of tone i was aiming for. so glad it came across..!!!

also my journal is. embarrassingly. empty. (〃´д`〃)

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pressurise January 5 2013, 08:25:45 UTC

ohgghhadohaodh... thank you..!!! i wasn t sure at first if i could pull this idea off without it being too overwhelming.. it s nice to know.. (●´ヮ`●) ♡ ♡

sunlit December 24 2012, 07:06:20 UTC

oh my :o

the concept and setting you laid out in this fic was very intriguing, and i really like how you delved into it - you didn't go down into detail, but you alluded to just enough of it that i didn't feel confused and didn't need much more explanation, yet left a few questions unanswered, if that made sense? ;; it added to the mystic feel of the entire story. and i really quite liked how one day woohyun just drops everything and leaves and finds something so new and so fascinating in a completely new place. the conversation with hoya and sunggyu was very very interesting too, at least to me, although i can't understand why myself ;_____; this left me with something to ponder, so thank you for this fic ♥

pressurise January 5 2013, 08:55:21 UTC

it s you..!!! FIRST. hi.. i love.. your stuff.. ☞☜

thank you so much..!! (〃๏ヮ๏〃) not going into the details and only revealing a certain amount of backstory was one of the things i was trying to achieve when writing this.. aahhhh.. ♡

sunlit January 5 2013, 09:49:36 UTC

eeeeeeeeeeeeeep omg thank you ;_____;!!! ♥

ah then you did a fantastic job of expressing what you intended to in this fic ;w; i just re-read it before replying to this comment and it's as good as it was when i first read it so brilliant job! :')

beefballs December 24 2012, 11:00:26 UTC

hello i loved this i loved this i loved this i loved this ♥

beefballs December 24 2012, 11:00:37 UTC

secret satan

pressurise January 5 2013, 08:33:48 UTC

beefballs.. beefballs.. i am hungry.

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pressurise January 5 2013, 08:59:05 UTC

thank you so much..!!! ♡ ♡ i did have much fun writing this uhuhuhuu..