[requisite '07 entry]

Mar 22, 2007 17:37

so i just burped
and my mouth tasted
briefly
like shitty weed
i haven't smoked any in over a month

honest

but i'll be damned
if i can't tell the difference anymore

now, seriously
would you call this a poem?

because as far as i can tell
this is a pointless observation
b r o k e n a p a r t
fragmented
and utterly without
merit

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summerwishes March 26 2007, 12:29:28 UTC
check...

MINUS!

hahahaha! just kidding.
yes please phone call give number or call again

i'm in a show this weekend i forgot to tell you in the other message

it's FREE! come see it. it's my last college show.

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sweet_tyranny March 28 2007, 07:47:38 UTC
woooooooohoooooo '07....next stop '08....I cant wait

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anonymous March 30 2007, 15:03:22 UTC
amazing, chris kingsbury in another salem state show.... wow this girls going all the way. nice poem crumb bum

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