Standing naked in the rain

[infiniteblue17]

She wonders what it would feel like
to stand naked in the rain.
She fancies she should try it once,
just herself, thin and plain.

She would free her dampened hair
so it may trail down her back,
and entertain the icy drops
until it's cold and slack.

To tilt her head back to the sky
and let the water hit her face.
If arms spread wide should be too bold,
she

Comments

[infiniteblue17]

It actually takes a while for me to make it flow... natural rhyming is one of the hardest poetic techniques, in my opinion.

It makes me think, too.

[queen_bowie]

that's beautiful <3 it made me feel shivery

[infiniteblue17]

*^_^* Thank you.