Fic: Because I could not stop for Death

Aug 14, 2010 05:43

Title: Because I could not stop for Death
Rating: T just to be safe. Character death and a little bit of swearing.
Summary: Three ways Shepard's life could have gone and one way it did.

The Alliance searched the planet for almost a month before identifying the alien lifeform assumed responsible for the deaths of fifty-two marines, thirty-seven civilians and twelve N7 operatives. )

fanfic, mass effect

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infelixsoror August 14 2010, 11:44:37 UTC
Thank you!

(The first time I encounted a Thresher Maw in-game, I yelped and drove my little Mako to the top of the nearest mountain as fast as I could!)

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coststolove August 15 2010, 00:03:13 UTC
I really loved this. The alternate bits where things go differently are a great touch.
He wished he’d banged up the Normandy a little more in that final fight, because Shep had never broken a promise she made to him before. That line made me choke up a bit. D:

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infelixsoror August 15 2010, 15:19:27 UTC
Thanks for the review!

This was meant to be a study in the 'road not taken', but somehow the alternative versions became snippets. Glad to know it still worked!

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ssrobajo August 15 2010, 01:30:19 UTC
This was a pleasure to read. Interesting concept and you completely nailed it.

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infelixsoror August 15 2010, 15:19:40 UTC
Thanks!

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thirteenthchime August 15 2010, 03:01:13 UTC
This was a great read. The last two paragraphs were just perfect.

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infelixsoror August 15 2010, 15:20:01 UTC
Thanks for the review!

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yumikoyoshihana August 15 2010, 03:37:00 UTC
This was a great read, I love your style.

My favorite line: "N7s did three impossible things before breakfast, mostly because someone had told them they couldn’t."

Any plans on doing these for the other backstories? As someone who chose Colonist and War Hero, i'd like to see your take on those. in particular

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infelixsoror August 15 2010, 16:37:24 UTC
The N7s seem to me like the big damn heroes of the galaxy! Thanks for the review!

This is about 'my' Shepard, but I'm playing through again with different backstories, so we'll see what my off-kilter mind comes up with next. =)

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