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Real Person Fic - CW: Pharmakon [Part 4/4]

Jan 23, 2015 23:38

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PART FOUR

( For I have sworn thee fair and thought thee bright, who art as black as hell, as dark as night. )

six swans!verse, real person fic: cw, pharmakon

Comments 113

b_lessed January 25 2015, 20:45:24 UTC

I loved this! The original fairytale has always had a special place in my heart, and you did it justice.

cherie_morte January 26 2015, 01:22:16 UTC

It's one of my favorite fairytales, too. I'm so so happy that you thought I did right by it. Thanks very much for reading and commenting.

valhalla_loki January 26 2015, 01:31:40 UTC

Such a lovely story! Thank you for sharing :)

cherie_morte January 26 2015, 01:41:17 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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cherie_morte January 26 2015, 02:06:54 UTC

Thank you so much! :D

the_7th_swan January 26 2015, 09:05:12 UTC

This old fairytale was always one of my personal favourites and, thus, I cannot express my love for this fic. Really enjoyed the little changed you made as they made the fic all the more enjoyable to read.

Additionally, if this is a fairytale you like, the adaption by Juliet Marillier 'Daughter of the Forest' is worth checking out.

Thanks for sharing!

cherie_morte January 26 2015, 14:36:18 UTC

Heeeeey!! Look at your username! *tickled*

I'm so glad that you loved the story and didn't mind the changes I had to make! That's always a huge relief with an adaptation. :D

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and for the book/story rec.

expectative January 26 2015, 10:47:37 UTC

Cherie, Cherie, Cherie, I love youuuu <3

No, seriously, it's been so much fun working with you on this story, even though you did most of the work and even found a way to include George Clooney (my plan all along!) in a funny, clever way :p

Also, I don't know which part I liked the best, though I have to say that when Jared founds out about Sammy made my cold little heart explode in tiny pieces in my ribcage, and the sex was super hot, and Jared talking in the end was kinda weird because you get used to him being mute but then he's being a silly, sassy little shit who suddenly becomes a ROYAL sassy little shit, and then they're happy for ever AND OMG I JUST LOVE IT THANK YOU CHERIE OF THE HOUSE BAGGINS

cherie_morte January 26 2015, 15:46:57 UTC

NOOOOO. I REFUSE TO BELIEVE YOUR EYE DID NOT TWITCH OVER GEORGE CLOONEY. I REFUSE TO BELIEVE IT.

It's okay, Tom. You can like all the parts best. I will accept that. I think Jensen felt the same as you re: "I'm glad Jared's talking but he's also 10x sassier now and this will take some getting used to."

Thank YOU for making an awesome prompt and letting me run with my ideas and not beating me over the head with a baguette for my chronic last minuteness. I'm so so happy that you enjoyed the story, and I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know which parts in particular you enjoyed, not just in this comment but throughout the draft process as well.

Signed,
Cherie of the House of Baggins