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siriala May 11 2014, 19:15:09 UTC
This day is turning out to be a bad one and here you are with your adorable story to put a smile back on my face. Please, never stop doing that :)

I love your Jensen and his obsession with doll's houses, and Jared's love for his kid (who feels more adult than me already !).

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cherie_morte May 12 2014, 00:14:22 UTC
Awwww, I'm sorry your day wasn't great. I'm so so happy that my story could bring a little bit of happiness back into it. <3333 Thank you for reading and letting me know what you thought.

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laurathelurker May 12 2014, 06:30:10 UTC
Loved this so much. Just the undeniable UST that grew into a deep love. And love the line about dolls pooping.

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cherie_morte May 13 2014, 08:25:05 UTC
So happy you enjoyed it, haha!

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stripytights May 12 2014, 19:07:22 UTC
Combined with your salt_burn_porn story, you're two for two on making me read things I wouldn't usually, and once again it was worth it. This was incredibly sweet, and it's so good to read a story that manages to combine an actual genuine reason for not getting together with such a wonderful ending that felt realistic, earned and right for them both. You've got great banter going on between them as well, there's such an ease to it and a sense of fun. Enjoyed the whole thing, thanks so much for writing.

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cherie_morte May 13 2014, 08:27:56 UTC
\o/ I am honored, bb, honored! I know what it's like to have those authors where you are like, "I cannot believe I am actually clicking this, what am I doing," so it's a great compliment that you're willing to follow me on things like that. :D

I'm so relieved that you thought the reason for them not getting together felt real (is there anything worse than reading a story that clearly invents conflict just to invent conflict???) and that you thought I was able to earn the turnaround on that by the end. Thanks so much for reading a commenting!

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shenova May 12 2014, 21:17:03 UTC
Loved your story so cute and Jared owning a toy shop and making dolls houses and furniture how cool is that VERY. Emma is a very lucky girl. BRILLIANT.

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cherie_morte May 13 2014, 08:34:44 UTC
Thank you so much. :)

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z3s_keep_going May 13 2014, 15:47:56 UTC
this was adorable! love all the snark haha

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cherie_morte May 13 2014, 17:42:31 UTC
So happy you enjoyed it!

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