Well, this was just all kinds of great :). I wasn't going to be able to leave a slavefic with knotting unread, but it was so GOOD, and just YAY for that :D. I adored Jared's slow-developing comfort with the situation and with Jensen, and how very much he held himself in reserve until he could get the hang of the situation. But also, how it never really was blithely fine; how the smallest bit of misspeaking from Jensen could hammer home again the reality of the situation and the power imbalance, always there as Jared's ultimate reality, and his constant awareness of how vulnerable he really was to the whim of an owner
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I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story! I was definitely striving to get that point across, that no matter how good Jensen was, it still wasn't a situation that could be interpreted as acceptable, so I'm really really glad that came across to you!
And yes! I knew I could not end the story without making them equals somehow. I'm really happy you enjoyed that.
Haha, you know, they kind of slipped in there by accident and at the time I was like, "WTF ARE YOU DOING WHY ARE YOU PUTTING MARRIED MISHA AND GEN IN THIS AND WHY ARE THEY PREGNANT?" but in retrospect I think it's gotta be one of the best ideas I had. They also helped make the story a little more fun to write when things were tough between the boys, so that was cool. I'm really happy you had fun with them, as well.
Thank you SO MUCH for reading and taking the time to let me know what you thought! ♥
That was so damn good. Loved every word. Sad and funny and beautiful - all at the same time.
The boys were both so broken and you put them back together so well. And ending the story with Jared finding his own independence, saving Jensen and making them equal - perfect!
Brilliant fic, enjoyed it. Love Alpha/Omega stories, and this was really good. I adore a happy ending, but feel they needed revenge on Seb & to see slavery outlawed. Maybe a possibility of a sequal? Great Job & thanks for sharing Scorpie x
I'm very sorry you were unsatisfied with the ending. I'm glad that you enjoyed the rest, though. Thanks very much for reading and letting me know what you thought. : )
This was amazingly well put together. I love the dynamics between the two of them and the awkward, confused attraction. Both so convinced that the other really didn't want them. I was drawn in at the beginning and it never let go until the end. Awesome! And I suck at comments!
You DO NOT suck at comments! This one had me grinning! I'm so so happy that you liked this story--well put together is such a great compliment because I had to go through like 7 outlines to figure out how to organize this fic and I was really worried it would look like a disaster in practice. XD
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i just wish sebastian would pay
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And yes! I knew I could not end the story without making them equals somehow. I'm really happy you enjoyed that.
Haha, you know, they kind of slipped in there by accident and at the time I was like, "WTF ARE YOU DOING WHY ARE YOU PUTTING MARRIED MISHA AND GEN IN THIS AND WHY ARE THEY PREGNANT?" but in retrospect I think it's gotta be one of the best ideas I had. They also helped make the story a little more fun to write when things were tough between the boys, so that was cool. I'm really happy you had fun with them, as well.
Thank you SO MUCH for reading and taking the time to let me know what you thought! ♥
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The boys were both so broken and you put them back together so well.
And ending the story with Jared finding his own independence, saving Jensen and making them equal - perfect!
So much love<3
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I adore a happy ending, but feel they needed revenge on Seb & to see slavery outlawed. Maybe a possibility of a sequal?
Great Job & thanks for sharing
Scorpie
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Thanks for reading and for the input!
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