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cherie_morte in infatuated_ink

The Painted Veil: Walter

Aug 13, 2007 03:25

Title: Walter
Fandom: The Painted Veil by W. Somerset Maugham
Characters/Pairings: Kitty, Walter Jr.
Genre: Drama
Word Count: 1,598
Summary: Kitty is alone.
Author's Note: I actually wasn’t planning to write anything for this fandom, but then a bad influence asked me to, and I gave in. So here goes probably the most on-the-whim thing I’ve ever ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

anonymous August 13 2007, 07:36:38 UTC

My, my, my - we ARE a little harsh on dear, sweet, pretty little fairy-like and delicate Kitty, are we not? I kiiiddd!!!

This was SO good darling - and I love your style of writing. I especially love the sentence that was about as difficult to "perfect" as the text on my banner. However, I just love love love your style - and your ability to refrain from the awkward turtleness that IS dialogue...

and oh the irony! Poor Kitty (sort of) even Walter JUNIOR thinks you're ridiculous!

You had better write some more Painted Veil SOON!

britishness August 13 2007, 07:39:55 UTC

meeeeeee!

cherie_morte August 13 2007, 07:45:42 UTC

As if I didn't know, Witch.

cherie_morte August 13 2007, 07:45:00 UTC

Ah, aren't we applying a lot of adjectives we like to use to describe ourself to Kitty? Still upset about being called a bad influence?

Yay us, for we made our Painted Veil fannishness better for eachother tonight. I'm so glad you like it, dear. I wish I wasn't so awkward about dialogue because it's pretty rare you get something like this where you don't really need it.

Well, I certainly don't feel bad for her :oD

I wasn't planning to, but it you plan on corrupting my innocence further, it may happen :o))))