Real Person Fic - Football: On the Pursuit of Happiness

[cherie_morte]

Title: On the Pursuit of Happiness
Fandom: NCAA Football RPS
Characters/Pairings: Tim Tebow/Riley Cooper, assorted members of Tebow’s band of merry Gators
Genre: Umm…flangst! Hurt/Comfort!fail?
Rating: R for Language and Sexual Content (WOOO! \o/)
Word Count: 2,094
Author’s Note: Written for the first ever slashthehuddle challenge: A Picture is Worth a Thousand

Comments

[scorpiod1]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. SWEEET.

YOU SAID RILEY WAS A DOUCHEBAG AND HE KINDA IS BUT HE'S KINDA OF ADORABLE AND SWEET TOO! HE LOVES HIS TEBOW :D And the sex is hot, I don't care if it's R-rated, THIS IS A HOT BLOWJOB :D and this: Tim’s saying his name the way Riley imagines he calls out in church on Sundays - That is just awesome, I love that bit.

Tim’s smile lights up the whole fucking stadium (which is a fact and not just Riley’s very biased take on the situation, because Riley doesn’t think lame shit like that unless it’s undeniably true).

I LOVE THIS LINE SO FUCKING MUCH.

IN CONCLUSION: YAY GAY FOOTBALL PLAYERS WHO LOVE EACH OTHER.

Also, the sparkly gators just kill me.

[cherie_morte]

Sccooorrrrrrrpppppp. WHY ARE YOU THE CUTEST PERSON ALIVE?

RILEY IS SUCH A DOUCHE. HE'S MY FAVORITE DOUCHE EVER. DOUCHES HAVE HEARTS, TOO, SCORP.

I'm glad that you found the blowie hot and that you enjoyed that church line!

YAY GAY FOOTBALL AND SPARKLESSS.

[littlestclouds]

Aww. I really enjoyed this. I reeeeeally love Riley's voice. It was a fun read. :D

[cherie_morte]

Aww, yay! Thanks! I'm kind of stupidly attached to Riley Cooper, so I'm psyched to hear that ^_^

[darkeyedresolve]

I really liked this piece, and really liked your Riley Cooper. It actually seems kinda real to me, with Tim being overly emotional he would definitely need someone who is more grounded. I like how Cooper just takes and forces Tim to get over it, or at least helps clear his head.

Nice job, I do love Timmy Tebow.

[cherie_morte]

Thank you so much! What lovely things to say! I am really attached to Riley, so I'm glad you liked him.

And of course, Timmy is always swell ^_^

[nyychick23513]

Gah, so, yeah, thinking about that game still hurts. ;__; But your Riley voice? OMG, so good. I can totally see him not really knowing how to make Tim better, and being pissed off at everyone else both for knowing and for taking over what he thinks should be his role. And his secondhand embarrassment for Tim? I can totes see that too. (Which, btw, all those assholes who made fun of Tim and ridiculed him for crying? SMH. I'm with Riley.) I can also totally see Riley turning to sex as the only way to handle the situation. XD.

And Timmy turning into a tyrant before the Sugar Bowl? LMFAO SO TRUE. And that picture? With that smile?! *flail!* WHY SO PRETTY?

Ahem. Anyhoo. I was at the Sugar Bowl with my girl hellozombies and there was seriously nothing funnier than Riley gettin' down with that trophy like he owned it. Oh, Coop. So good for the lulz. But yeah, it may not have been where they wanted to be, but that was the perfect way to end the season - and their senior years. So, anyway. I'm babbling but that's all to say this made me very happy. ^_^

[cherie_morte]

Oh yayyy! I am so tickled that you liked my Riley voice!! :DDD

That game was such a high point! I am quite jealous that you got to go to the game! But wutendeskind kept pausing the game every five minutes to get these pictures and when Riley started parading around with the trophy like King of the Douchebags? Oh man, my heart was doing back flips. *_*

Thanks for reading! Getting a comment on this just made me smile so wide! :D

[nyychick23513]

See, we weren't even planning on going until we thought it was Riley and Timmy and Urban's last game as Gators. I drove BY MYSELF from Florida for that shit. AND IT WAS THE BEST TRIP EVAR. We even got high-fives from Timmy after the game, you know, where he does his little lap? ♥

XD. It's so true, he really is a douchebag. But he's our douchebag! <3

Very happy to have made you smile! You did the same with this fic, so I thought it was only fair. :)

[cherie_morte]

TIMMY TOUCHED YOU? SO JEALOUS **_**

YES, EXACTLY. OUR DOUCHEBAG WITH A HEART OF GOLD (and beer).

<3