Rosemallows versus Bees
to Leanne, 17
The bees that, together,
in swarms, buzz and
plunge to booze nectar
from the flowers that croon,
deaf-chorus, Alas,
alas, they steal our water,
and, deaf-chorused, cry
Alas, alas, you rob us
to the bees, yellow-
cargoed round balls
whose gossamer
wings are more still, less
flurry when their beaks
swill
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Thanks, dear. I think this is one of the better poems I've written: more rhythm than what I've posted thus far, and on MNFF, better linebreaks, better sonics and gathering of images. Still seems a little two-dimensional with it only being about the bees drinking nectar and then getting stitched, but I'm afraid I didn't have any other idea to inco-operate / any intriguing idea. *hint hint :P*
Anyway, feel free to do whatever you like with it. It's yours.
Best,
James
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