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Raspberries

Jan 29, 2007 22:40

Title: Raspberry
Author: oops_pig
Disclaimer: None of this is real .....
Pairing:Rating: PG-13
Summary: The smell of her, of raspberries, permeate his senses and he can't stop thinking about her
Author's Notes: Companion piece to Coffee and Answering Machines. Jensen's POV

( It was the fact that he could still feel her tiny waist around his hand the fact that he had woken up with the smell of raspberries, the same smell that he'd caught a whiff of in her hair, that smell in his nostrils for days after he'd seen her last )

kristen bell, jensen ackles, drabbles

Comments 5

lolitaro January 29 2007, 14:16:26 UTC

Once again this is very cute! It's great that you did a Jensen pov and went a bit further. I like it a lot.

Would you happen to have more laing around? or just a plan for more?

inevitablefict January 29 2007, 23:06:20 UTC

Thank you very much.

I don't have any more laying around, or a concrete plan for more, but if the mood strikes me I guess more'll come.

wildly_wrathful January 29 2007, 19:17:38 UTC

Loved those last two lines. Amazing job! I like this one better than the coffee one!

inevitablefict January 29 2007, 23:07:17 UTC

Aw, thanks! I guess it's better because its more established (and also cos I'm better at writing in Jen's POV *g*

jenskyies January 30 2007, 07:05:02 UTC

Aww, cute. I love the thought of Jensen courting, like in a traditional sense. And how normal it seems, No slutfest or outrageousness (although I like that sometimes too). It's just so sweet.