Fic: Lost in the Woods (Karen/Creatures) [Original]

[inell]

Title: Lost in the Woods
Summary: When Karen answers a call about a missing camper, she doesn’t plan on getting lost nor does she expect to be found by a group of creatures unlike anything she’s ever seen.
Characters: Karen/Multiple Creatures
Rating: Adult
Word Count: 3210
Warnings: Rape/Non-Con, Creatures, original fic
For tamlane for inspiring me to

Comments

[tamlane]

So yeah, I have no idea why gory creature noncon gangbangs get my blood pumping so hard, but this was HOT AS HELL!!!!!! And OMG, you really know how to end these things on just the right note. XD

Thank you so much for indulging me!!!!! You know you're spoiling me, Inell, right? ♥

[inell]

Haha. Everyone has their own kinks ;) I'm glad you enjoyed this one! I appreciate you inspiring me to dabble in original stuff, especially when you say nice things about my characterization. :D I'm hoping I might be able to transition the writing into different genres eventually. LOL <333

[velvetwhip]

This is as dark as the last... and just as fabulous!

Gabrielle

[inell]

Thank you, honey! <333 I appreciate you reading. ♥

[syrenslure]

This is very similar in tone to your previous story, but a little better fleshed out. I did see a few repeated ideas/images, though, as if you are feeling your way through it. It does feel a little unfinished/unedited/stream of consciousness, especially in the beginning, where the sentences are very long and seem to run together. However, I do like the backstory, character building and detail you have put into those passages. They were just a little dense for me to sift through and read. I would like to see them cleaned up and more consistant with your normal style.

That being said I really like this and where you are going with it. I think you should continue to play with this and any original idea that come to you. I am enjoying exploring it with you :)

[inell]

Hmm. Okay. I did have someone beta and read through it. The imagery is definitely similar. The basic idea of searching/looking and then being attacked etc. and I am definitely focusing on characterization and learning the ways to worldbuild in original without info dump or too many unnecessary details. I'll keep it in mind if I write another original about the dense long sentences and readability! Thank you for pointing those out.

I appreciate your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed this one even with the few issues! <3

[amorette]

Omg. This is so intense! I love Karen being used like that by the creatures, that is really hot.

[inell]

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it ;)