Fic: Afternoon Delight (Hermione/"Ron" -Read warnings)

[inell]

Title: Afternoon Delight
Characters/Pairings: Hermione/”Ron” (She believes it’s Ron, but it’s someone else using polyjuice and deceiving her)
Rating: Adult
Summary: Hermione is surprised when Ron shows up at her office for a little afternoon delight.
Word Count: 2170
Warning: This involves someone using polyjuice to become Ron then having sex with

Comments

[tamlane]

OMG, Inell!

Like.

WTF WAS THAT?!

That was bloody hot as hell is what it was! *fans self* The vulgarity of him grabbing his crotch, and that moment of anger as he makes her tell him what she wants. Guh! And the dirty talk. I can't even. And you did it all without veering into Ron-bashing territory, which I always appreciate in Hermione infidelity fics. Sure, "Ron" is bashing Ron, but of course he would, wouldn't he? Hermione is simply startled and swept away in the moment, and oh lord, I can just imagine how she'll react when she finds out what's happened.

But what really killed me here? The ending. Nnnngh. I've been dying for some cuckolding fic with an edge of humiliation to it, and this fic scratched that itch so hard. Thank you for writing this! I'd love to have it at hp_het_taboo if you'd like to post it there.

[inell]

Oh yay! Someone read it! LOL I wasn't sure anyone would. The idea struck me, though, and I had to get it written. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm also glad that it came through that it wasn't Ron-bashing or any sort of thing like that beyond the Man comparing himself to him and questioning his relationship with Hermione etc. I'm also glad you liked the end! I had that image in my head firmly, even if I deliberately left it open to the reader to imagine whoever they wanted as the Man. That's part of the twisted fun, I think, letting the reader fill in their own blank and sort of take the idea where they want.

Oh, sure. I'll post over there! I don't know if anyone would be into it, but I'm happy to post! I'm just thrilled you enjoyed it and it scratched an itch you were having! ♥

[tamlane]

That's part of the twisted fun, I think, letting the reader fill in their own blank and sort of take the idea where they want.

Oh yes! GUH! I was going to mention that and forgot, I was just so swept away in the transgressive goodness! I love that you left it open-ended. Although. *cough* Way to tease with the het anal. ;)

[inell]

Hee! You always have such ego-building comments! *struts* Crossposted to Taboo, btw! Maybe someone there will enjoy it! And LOL. Well, it's only a tease if it never happens! I have plans for het anal in something coming up! And the Hermione Multiple is going to have a little bit of everything, if it goes like it's developing in my head! LOL

[vagrantben]

You naughty, naughty little minx! That was a brilliant piece of infidelity that worked on so many levels. I may like Ron, but I'm not one for Ron/Hermione as a couple. So this had me riveted, but I also desperately want to know who the actual person doing the loving to Hermione was!

[inell]

Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And that's part of the fun! Letting the reader imagine whoever they want as the Man!

[_snitchbitch]

That was .. that was WOW. I kind of want to know who it was, and I kind of don't.
I also kind of wish I had an office :)

[inell]

Hee! It's whoever you want it to be! I'm glad you enjoyed it, hon! ♥

[sln1987]

Oh this is wonderful. I am not a Hr/R shipper so this works wonderfully for me.

Very Hot, I love how you made it open in the end as well.

[inell]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥