Fic: Choices

[inell]

I wrote this a few months ago, before I really started using LJ that much and I don't think I posted it on here. Decided to post it since I thought it was pretty good and is one of my favorite Lucius characterizations I've written

Comments

[underlucius]

Ooo. The thing about the Snucius is that everyone writes it differently, and this is no exception. I like the way you handle their first meeting, giving us a glimpse into Severus' mind, but no more, and that's how it should be from this PoV.

Your style has changed, but then it's a long time ago, my style has changed since then too.

I really liked it, I liked the way he finally has to admit that he loves someone, that he has to stop running. (hate the word sev, but apart from that - yummy!! thank you for linking me.!!

xxx

[inell]

LOL...Yes, I can't stand the nickname now, either. At that time, it didn't even occur to me because I tend to shorten people's names a lot in RL *sheepish smile* Oh, style always changes. My fic now is much different than this from last year and they're both drastically different than what I wrote in 1999 etc. I think I've gotten better lately, but that's just me. *grin* I should rewrite this one sometime since I did like the concept quite a bit. It was more of a "trying to talk to Lucius" sort of experiment. Anyway, as always, squee over YOU commenting on my silly little fics!

[underlucius]

Any excuse to come to your LJ dear, I love lusting after the nekkid Weasleys.

xxx