Yay, you posted this. I thought it was just such an original direction to take with Hermione, and you wrote and played it out so well. I was proud to be even a teeeny part of it with Harry.
Said it before, will say it again - this makes me want to cry. But so true, that we bear the burden of our actions. And this carries it out more thoroughly than anything JKR wrote.
Very cleverly written. I love how Flitwick deals with her. The whole aspect of Hermione and her parents growing apart as she lives in another world is important and nicely drawn here. You have a marvelous talent.
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So very well written and played out.
*hugs*
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