Fic: A Small Step (Hermione/Ron/Harry)

[inell]

Title: A Small Step
Author: Inell
Challenge: Someone other than Harry needs comforting from the other two
Summary: Hermione is going through one of the hardest things in her life, and Ron isn't sure he and Harry can come through for her.
Word Count: 3200
Rating: PG13
Notes: Thanks to Florahart for the brilliant beta. My entry for the triofqf

Comments

[secretsolitaire]

Ooh. Beautiful, sensitive story. I can totally see the trio like this.

[inell]

Thank you! ♥

[ohecstasy]

I'm basically crying my eyes out right now. That was so well-written and emotional and AH, genius.

[inell]

Thank you!

[mrsquizzical]

oh sob!

beautiful.

[inell]

Thank you!

[soberloki]

Ron's really the emotional voice of the Trio, isn't he? Hermione's the brains and Harry is sort of the magical brawn, but Ron's the one who's been surrounded by people who love him for his entire life, and has learned to puzzle them out, even if it's just a wee bit.

BTW, I'm crying. Excellent. So sad and perfect.

[inell]

Yes, he is. It's why they balance so perfectly. Glad you liked it!

[evieeros]

Speaking as a cancer survivor (although admittedly NOT breast cancer) I feel that you have done a wonderful job of portraying what comes after treatment. Honestly I felt that during my treatment was the easiest part! Trying to get back to my life however was incredibly difficult and still is sometimes. Also, although I am not sure you intended this it is a great tribute fic for October = Breast Cancer Awareness Month.

Great story!

[inell]

Thank you so much! I'm really happy that you felt it dealt with this serious issue realistically. I appreciate the comment!