Paid In Full

[ineedmymods]

For erised1810
From h311ybean

Title: Paid In Full
Fandom: Harry Potter (books)
Rating: G
Author's Notes: Inspired by the prompt "How can I pay you back?" and set at various points in canon (mostly late DH). I hope Neville does not disappoint! Thank you to in_the_blue for beta-reading!

Comments

[tanyareed]

Neville is my favorite character, and I think you did a great job with him here!

[h311ybean]

Thank you! I had never tried to write him before, so I'm glad I was able to do him justice!

[erised1810]

oh wow. Neville is spot-on! what a wonderful way to point out how he has grown. This was a great story. Thank you so much!

[h311ybean]

You're very welcome! I'm glad you liked it :) And thank you, too, for the kind words!

[proudofthefish]

I love Nevile and how you book ended his story. Also the end with Al and Scorpius. What a perfect set up for an epic friendship.

[h311ybean]

Thank you very much :)

And re: Al and Scorpius, I can just imagine those two snarking at each other and pretending that no, they're not that close....

[ashavah]

I have such a soft spot for Neville fics, and this is so lovely. Neville is so understated and unassuming, it's just perfect for him. I love his voice and I love the loyalty and dedication you have him bring to his work. I also love the way you've explored how important being offered that chance to be a little more than he thought he could be so early on had on him and him deciding to pass that on. Lovely!

[h311ybean]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story. It was fun writing about something nice happening to Neville in his first year (and it was all thanks to Professor Sprout - Hufflepuff Pride!).