Safe - Chapter 6

May 25, 2007 10:22

Characters: Ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1,200ish
Spoilers: AU, but let's say through 1.17 ("Company Man"). And there's one tiny, tiny spoiler for 1.23 ("How To Stop An Exploding Man"), but it's not plot-related and it's all over the internets by now anyway.
A/N: Inspired by the
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safe, heroes_fic, heroes, peterandclaude, peter, bennet, claude

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c_quinn May 25 2007, 09:38:59 UTC
Nobody's like us, thinks Claude. Nobody's like you-

Perfect.

Always love reading this story.

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indyhat May 25 2007, 09:39:30 UTC
Thank you! :)

What are you even still doing up?

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c_quinn May 25 2007, 09:39:54 UTC
I have no idea...

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indyhat May 25 2007, 09:45:42 UTC
I was hoping you'd say "writing Claude kicking Alex's ass".

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gingerberrysnap May 25 2007, 10:05:35 UTC
I get unreasonably happy when I see this updated, because I really love where you're taking the story and the characters. This chapter in particular has me really interested in that backstory on how Peter met Claude.

I felt really bad for Claude here: But perhaps not yet, though he knows this thought is born of cowardice. Please, not yet.

He's finally found something good in Peter and is probably afraid that Peter won't want to be with him anymore once Peter finds out about Claude's past. The way things are going I don't think Claude is going to get away with keeping it a secret for much longer.

Looking forward to the next part, as always. :)

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indyhat May 25 2007, 10:30:58 UTC
I get unreasonably happy when I see this updated

Comments like this make me unreasonably happy, too! :D

really interested in that backstory on how Peter met Claude.

It's probably fairly mundane. But I'll have to work it in, somehow! Gotta love flashbacks :)

He's finally found something good in Peter and is probably afraid that Peter won't want to be with him anymore once Peter finds out about Claude's past.

He's terrified.

I don't think Claude is going to get away with keeping it a secret for much longer.

Well, Claude's ... evasive, when he needs to be.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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gingerberrysnap May 25 2007, 10:39:16 UTC
It's probably fairly mundane.

I do get the sense that however they met and came together was probably fairly normal-- no rooftop stick beatings or attempted strangulations against lightpoles. That's why I'm so interested! *laughs*

He's terrified.

Poor Claude. He'll feel better for it once he tells Peter, because there's no way Peter is just going to up and leave Claude. He'll comfort Claude instead. Er, right? LOL.

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indyhat May 25 2007, 10:51:54 UTC
I do get the sense that however they met and came together was probably fairly normal

I think so. I think that by that point, Claude only wanted normal. So actually, he was probably a bit surprised that Peter was special.

You've just given me a great idea for a flashback chapter. Cheers! :D

He'll feel better for it once he tells Peter, because there's no way Peter is just going to up and leave Claude. He'll comfort Claude instead. Er, right?

It's always about timing. And that's probably all I should say about that ;)

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betterthanlegos May 25 2007, 17:08:06 UTC
Yee. This just gets better and better.

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indyhat May 25 2007, 17:40:08 UTC
Thank you! Glad you're having fun with it :)

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reiko_forrester May 25 2007, 18:20:43 UTC
Again, this is awesome. It's unfolding so wonderfully. :D

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indyhat May 25 2007, 20:55:28 UTC
Thank you! So pleased you're enjoying it :)

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cucumber_k May 25 2007, 23:00:45 UTC
You made him read Schopenhauer! I love you. Of course Peter hates it.

"'Look - I wasn't always a bookseller.'" Don't know why but that made me laugh.

I wouldn't say no to an Uncle Claude.

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indyhat May 25 2007, 23:51:44 UTC
You made him read Schopenhauer! I love you.

*g* I'm glad you like. That was for you, of course.

Of course Peter hates it.

Peter likes fairytales.

I wouldn't say no to an Uncle Claude.

Oh, I would. I would be having tremendously un-niece-like thoughts.

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cucumber_k May 26 2007, 03:07:54 UTC
Thank yoou for that!

You got a point there, tremendously un-niece-like thoughts indeed.

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