Comments | indyhat: Probability

indyhat

Probability

Dec 28, 2007 18:58

Characters: Claude/Bennet
Rating/Warnings: R, for extensive violence and bad language.
Word count: 3,384
Spoilers: Very minor ones up to S2, but virtually nothing past 1.17 ("Company Man")
Summary: Even after you've calculated the odds and checked your working, twice, some things are still just ... inevitable. Set between ".07%" and "The Hard Part ( Read more... )

brave_new_slash, heroes_fic, heroes, paper_pwns_all, claude, angst, rare_heroes, tasers ow ow ow, fic, bennet, morallygrayfic

Comments 44

dref22 December 29 2007, 00:35:08 UTC

Oh, wow, just wow! This made me glued to my monitor. Claude is heartbroken, Bennet is sorry and I'm happy! "Awesome" has to be the right word for this fic.

indyhat December 29 2007, 11:56:14 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it and that it held you :)

veetvoojagig December 29 2007, 02:02:43 UTC

I love it. Every bit of it.

indyhat December 29 2007, 11:56:42 UTC

Thanks! Ah, if only Bennet could say the same ... ;)

veetvoojagig December 29 2007, 12:52:59 UTC

*laughs* Yeah.

redlight_artist December 29 2007, 02:51:51 UTC

I loved this! Poor Claude, I love how you wrote them both with such depth. Most stories skimp on bitter!Claude working out his anger on Bennet.

More?

indyhat December 29 2007, 11:57:51 UTC

Thank you - very glad you liked it. And yeah, there isn't too much revenge!Claude/Bennet. There needs to be more.

Not sure where I'd go from here, but I will think about it (though am notoriously crap at sequels). Thanks for reading!

redlight_artist December 29 2007, 21:44:11 UTC

Umm... how about "my God I've missed you" sex? I bet Claude's got some built up "haven't had sex in nearly a decade" frustration and Bennet could put in his "iz can have the gay sexing nao? y/y?"

indyhat December 29 2007, 22:59:16 UTC

Hee! And yeah, that would be a big part of it. That and the "I can't believe you fucking shot me" sex. And "Yes, well now that's out of your system ... " etc ... ;)

I'm going away in three days. I wonder if I can write this before then.

nina_ds December 29 2007, 04:05:52 UTC

Wow, this was brutal. I loved it!

Now what?

I sent you an e-mail earlier tonight - hope it came through!

indyhat December 29 2007, 12:00:47 UTC

Wow, this was brutal. I loved it!

LOL! We're all masochists (possibly sadomasochists?) around here, apparently. I'm really glad it worked for you.

And yes, I got your email - will try to get back to you about it today :)

As for "Now what?" ... no idea! ;) You'd think there ought to be porn of some kind ... I hate writing porn. But that's what's needed, really.

entangled_now December 29 2007, 09:52:08 UTC

I love this, it's perfect and brutal and real and absolutely what the both of them probably wanted or at least needed to get out of their system in a really wrong and twisted way! And you wrote it perfectly!

indyhat December 29 2007, 12:01:37 UTC

Thank you very much :) Yes, teetering somewhere on that want/need borderline. Glad it was suitably twisted ;) Thanks for reading!