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indyhat

Safe - Chapter 33

Oct 22, 2007 21:03

Characters: Peter/Claude-centric ensemble
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, for language
Word count: 2,000
Spoilers: AU, but up to 1.17 ("Company Man"), to be safe.
Summary: Holocaust-era Heroes.
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine but the words.
A/N: Today we visit some strangely familiar territory with Peter and Claude, and Bennetti learns a secret. ( Previous ( Read more... )

heroes_fic, heroes, peterandclaude, claude, thompson, fic, safe, linderman, bennet, peter

Comments 65

c_quinn October 22 2007, 20:29:41 UTC

It's half an hour before Peter even has time to consider that he doesn't need the coat anymore.

To prove how truly perverted I am: I took that line to a very different place than you meant it and thought, "But-- Noah's watching..."

Yes, there is something wrong with me.

Loved the interaction between Peter and Claude (Peter will barely meet his eyes, and Claude sighs. "I'm sorry I hit you, all right?").

I'm so glad to see this back, though. It's excellent.

indyhat October 22 2007, 20:33:33 UTC

Damn, lady - you are one fast woman reader.

To prove how truly perverted I am: I took that line to a very different place than you meant it and thought, "But-- Noah's watching..."

LOL! Fast and pervy.

Glad you enjoyed - Peter is now firmly into channeling his inner teen. Joy ;)

Thanks!

c_quinn October 22 2007, 20:45:27 UTC

LOL! Fast and pervy.

That may explain why I'm so often called a slut... Hmm...

indyhat October 22 2007, 20:48:37 UTC

I would never comment on such heinous accusations.

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visiblemarket October 22 2007, 21:06:44 UTC

Squee! Why didn't you tell me this was up!

strangely familiar territory with Peter and Claude

*Laughs* I loved the strangely familiar territory.

"Well, I sort of expected you to move,"

*giggle*

"Nothin' - yet. But we've got a couple of days, an' that's a start."

It's a start! Heh.

Oh, I did love this. Very much. Even thought poor Linderman got hauled off.

And to bring in something else entirely...

"So ..."

Claude pauses, regarding Bennetti with some amusement. "Was wonderin' when you'd ask."

He receives a lofty glance. "Didn't like to give you the satisfaction."

I think my mind went somewhere unintended as well.

So, this was great, basically.

indyhat October 22 2007, 21:10:48 UTC

Squee! Why didn't you tell me this was up!

It, uh, didn't come up? ;) I'm thrilled that you're so pleased :) Thanks for enjoying all the little nods to canon!

I think my mind went somewhere unintended as well.

Filth! *points at the unclean mind*

Really glad you enjoyed :) Thanks for reading!

visiblemarket October 22 2007, 21:14:43 UTC

It, uh, didn't come up? ;)

Uh...*giggles*...never mind.

Filth! *points at the unclean mind*

c_quinn started it!

c_quinn October 22 2007, 21:16:14 UTC

c_quinn started it!

Traitor.

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whatwas October 22 2007, 21:44:08 UTC

awesome lovely chapter.....

I loved how you went back to basics with the Peter/Claude cannon actions of training and whatnot.

Beginning of the chapter definitely had some funny aspects to it, especially with Peter not reacting fast enough to the blow Claude landed on him and then being all upset over it.....

can't wait for the next chapter! ;)

indyhat October 23 2007, 06:33:17 UTC

Thank you! I had fun writing Peter and Claude in their traditional comfort-zone again ;)

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed! :)

betterthanlegos October 22 2007, 22:49:50 UTC

Hee! Awesome interactions and stuff. Yay training. Peter rather amuses me with his coat.

Keen.

indyhat October 23 2007, 06:34:00 UTC

*g* I would have made it Claude's coat, just to make you happy, but it's pretty cold out there and Claude ... needs his coat!

Thanks for reading :)

futuresoon October 23 2007, 00:57:35 UTC

You managed to bring the stick back into it! Oh, the stick. Plaude writers sometimes try to keep it away, but it always comes back, doesn't it...

Whoa, whoa, wait a minute. Am I being sympathetic for Linderman? Jesus Christ, woman, you're mean. And good. But in a mean way.

I rather like the idea of a woodcut prophecy. It's very...dramatic, I guess? We're so used to oils that we've forgotten what the other stuff is. :P But woodcuts fit in very nicely, for some reason.

The plot is starting to build! ehhhhxcellent. Does this mean that they might start the deathcamp smackdown any time soon? *is hopeful*

indyhat October 23 2007, 06:36:25 UTC

*g* Glad to be meeting your Plaude/stick needs ;)

Whoa, whoa, wait a minute. Am I being sympathetic for Linderman? Jesus Christ, woman, you're mean. And good. But in a mean way.

*punches the air victoriously* Oh, I'm so pleased that worked! I had in my notes "the Nazis take Linderman ... we find it more affecting than we really should". Yay! *is manipulative and stuff*

Glad the prophecy and the rest of it is working for you :) And yeah, they're a chapter or two away from the deathcamp smackdown (seriously dude, pro-wrestling terminology really should not feature in WWII ... and yet strangely ... )

Thanks for reading! :)