The Deep End 3: Day After

[indyhat]

Word count: 2,500 on the nose.
Characters: Peter, Claude.
Rating: soft R, for angst and language, though not in the same league as the previous installment.
Warning: Contains one oblique reference to 9/11, and dark themes.
Spoilers: Up to 1.17 ("Company Man").
A/N: This takes place somewhere in the vicinity of 1.14 ("Distractions"), and is the sequel

Comments

[c_quinn]

He tastes the thought, experimenting with it, trying it out.

Loved that.

So glad you're continuing with this.

[indyhat]

Thank you :)

I hadn't been going to continue with it as a series, but bits kept suggesting themselves and I think I'm now roped in to at least one more piece.

[indyhat]

Thank you! :)

[runningondreams]

Yay! *hugs the angst* I like the way you're going back and forth between povs here, and I really enjoy your characterization for them: both a bit broken, both angry, both lonely.... ^^ The introspection is well done.

[indyhat]

Thank you, that's nice to hear. Broken, angsty and lonely is exactly where I see them. Of course, we'll have to fix that last one.

I can't seem to help swapping POVs! Glad it works for you.

[bigbadwolfeboro]

I liked this

[indyhat]

Thank you :)

[betterthanlegos]

Oooh I really liked this.
And I loved the last line
:D

[indyhat]

Yay! Thank you :)

They should totally get a room so they can hit each other properly. Oh wait, that's the next chapter. *g*

[betterthanlegos]

Can't wait to read that ;D

[indyhat]

LOL! I just noticed your icon.