Characters: Peter/Claude-centric ensemble
Rating/Warnings: PG-13
Word count: 1,200ish.
Spoilers: AU; at most 1.06 ("Better Halves"), but not really.
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine but the words.
Summary: Holocaust-era Heroes
A/N: We're back! Today catches up with Claire, and provides her with some back-story. (
Previous chapters)
For a long time, Clara had
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Misha manages to jump ahead in class in this one, instead of simply not doing any work? Considering how many years he jumps--what is it, four?--I'm impressed.
But, then again, what could he do with his power in this timeframe? Computers are huge, if they exist at all...which probably leaves him with machinery. Not much fun to talk to, or as accessible in a school (which is part of why Micah did so poorly in school, I think).
It wasn't dull to read, but I agree with you on the "lack of plot" thing. Still, I liked the chapter.
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Misha manages to jump ahead in class in this one, instead of simply not doing any work? Considering how many years he jumps--what is it, four?--I'm impressed.
Misha's smart, in this one. I've ... changed things, a little. You'll get some reveal ... eventually ;)
Yeah, I'm not crazy about this chapter. But I think I've worked out what's going to happen to Claire next, which is a good thing.
Thanks for reading!
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Poor Clara, reproachful pickles are a scary thought. You made Zach a physics geek! That's so cool. What's Clara gonna do alone? Don't let anything evil happen to her.
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... well, OK, maybe not ;)
I'm glad Zach being a physics geek works for people ;)
And Clara isn't going to be alone for long ... though I can't promise that nothing bad will happen to her (sorry, hun).
While I have you, dear, can you help me out? You mentioned that Claude would like Schopenhauer and one other philosopher, and for the life of me, I can't remember whom. Do you mind if I rummage through your brain?
(No, I'm not writing back-story. Why would I do that? Why? *whistles innocently*)
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Kafka I like as something Claude would read. Definitely :)
Thanks!
(there was another writer you mentioned ... someone who had a history of being in gay relationships, at least in a closet way ... and now I can't remember who!)
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It wasn't dull, it was...sad. And I'm worried about Bennet...things did not look like they'd be going well for him at all.
By the way, it's especially rich of Nicole to be so concerned with Clara what with her selling her family down the river before.
Coherence right now? Not my strong suit. Sorry. But I'd missed this story; I'm glad it's back.
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Yeah, I could have gone off on one here about self-harm and self-esteem and just general teenage angst ... ! But then we'd never get on to the actual plot ;)
I'm worried about Bennet...things did not look like they'd be going well for him at all.
We'll come back to Bennet in not too long. You did read the chapter where he's in the police-cell, right? So we know he's not dead ...
By the way, it's especially rich of Nicole to be so concerned with Clara what with her selling her family down the river before.
*g* Bwahahahah. Don't feel bad: you were supposed to to think that. But actually, she didn't!
Thanks for reading, as ever :)
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How soon is "not too long", re: Bennet? I know he's not dead, but...SS officers, not a good sign.
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Bennet's chapter is the next but one, I think. I hope to turn out another chapter today but it might be Saturday/Sunday before we get to catch up with Bennet, because I seem to be ridiculously busy between now and then!
And you're right, SS officers are never a good sign.
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