Characters: Peter/Claude-centric ensemble
Rating/Warnings: PG-13
Word count: 1,000ish.
Spoilers: AU; at most, 1.17 ("Company Man")
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine but the words.
Summary: Holocaust-era Heroes
A/N: (
Previous chapters)
Clara wakes in a dark lane, cheek numb against the cold cobbles, and surrounded by glittering triangles. Glass. She moves,
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Excellent bit of tension with Thomassen.
salutes him, a springy, staccato gesture
Loved that.
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Billain!
Yours has arrived. ;)
What, I only get the one??
Excellent bit of tension with Thomassen.
Thank you :)
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If I said "yes", would you limit it to him? ;)
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You are EVIL.
No, what I'd do is, email you my entire story outline so that you'd know what happened without actually having read the narrative. Because I am EVIL.
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I still can't wait to find out how they know Peter is an empath.
I loved this image from Hiro's dream: But time washes him away, and only empty bubbles leave his mouth, swirling in the grey waters until they are lost.
Though I still worry about whether or not there is a future!Claude. I know you're leaving it purposely vague, but something tells me future!Peter has no Claude. :(
Great as always!
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I may be taking huge liberties with him here and making him - *gasp!* - even creepier ;)
I still can't wait to find out how they know Peter is an empath.
Hmm. I'm not sure I've even planned to address that head-on, but I will try to remember to add the hints.
I loved this image
I still worry about whether or not there is a future!Claude. I know you're leaving it purposely vague, but something tells me future!Peter has no Claude. :(
I am, and I think it will probably stay that way. I'm pleased that people are reading into it what I tried not to write into it, if you see what I mean.
Thanks for reading! :D
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i LOVE the desription of phasing it was awesome i've never read about how it would feel..
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See above reply to englishmuffin2 ...
i LOVE the desription of phasing
Thank you! I had fun with that :)
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you have such grasp on the canon characters but you've also made them distinctly AU versions of themselves at the same time, which a lot of AUs never really manage.
Thank you - I'm hugely flattered!
do what the show never quite managed: making me care about the DL/Niki/Micah storyline.
*g* I never really cared all that much for it either! I'm glad if I'm doing OK by them here, since I wasn't that convinced.
love your explanation of what DL/Danil's powers feel like.
Thank you :) It was just a random idea, but it seems to have grabbed people.
Thanks for reading and commenting! :)
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To balance things, let me compliment you on But time washes him away, and only empty bubbles leave his mouth, swirling in the grey waters until they are lost.
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