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indusnm

Fic: Gen When a Hero Dies R

Feb 21, 2007 19:33

When a Hero Dies
Indus

Disclaimer: Only lay claim to Sonja

Warning: Death of major character. Gen

Rating: R for a brief mention of extra-curricular activites

Spoilers: Mainly IMToD

Angst abound

She stumbles as she gets out of the car, but the money doesn't fall. Not after what she did to get it. Still, the jerk who just got a blow job in his shiny BMW can ( Read more... )

deathfic, future, fic, supernatural, spn

Comments 14

anonymous February 22 2007, 03:04:18 UTC

I thought this was a very well and cleverly written fic. Your idea of Dean becoming a reaper was very original. In all my time in fandom, I haven't seen that yet, so major props! I, personally, loved the character of Tessa, so seeing her again was enjoying. You have a wonderful grasp of your language, and your details are lovely. Everything was clear and well described.

There were a few things, specifically punctuation, that did distract from the overall flow of the story. But, please, don't let this deter you from continuing to write. As I've said, you have a wonderful style and original idea. I hope to see more from you soon. :)

Other fic indusnm February 25 2007, 23:27:42 UTC

Thanks for the encouragement. Have you read my other fic? I promise to write more, hopefully happier fics!
Indus

cascadepd February 22 2007, 03:09:32 UTC

Oh my *wipes tear* how sad! I loved this!

Ha- love the icon indusnm February 23 2007, 01:21:09 UTC

He is, even with a mouthful of nuts (or candy, I don't remember)! Anyway, thanks for the review.
Incidentally, English is my first language, but I've been out of the country speaking another one for a few years, and my English has deteriorated, so I'd appreciate it if you could tell me my mistakes- off list, of course! Please email me at indus_nm@yahoo.com
Thanks
Indus

1tinkerbell February 22 2007, 03:57:41 UTC

i don't know why i read death!fic about dean because every time i do i want to cry. *sniff* u did a great job on the plot!*smiles*

Icon indusnm February 23 2007, 01:19:25 UTC

That is such a cool icon- what is it from? Is that Veronica Mars next to the boys? Anyway, thanks for the review, and I'm sorry for the deathfic. I've been incredibly stressed and I think tragedy is the way I get over that... Weird, huh?
Indus

coiledsoul February 22 2007, 04:59:24 UTC

what a great piece. i almost got teary there in the end. thanks for sharing.

Review indusnm February 23 2007, 01:17:55 UTC

You're welcome, and thanks so much for the review!
Indus

snfan3 February 22 2007, 06:29:28 UTC

doh! you made be get all teared up! Saying goodbye to Sammy when it wasn't him!!

Great writing. Thanks for sharing.

Being there indusnm February 23 2007, 01:17:02 UTC

After all they've been through, at a time like that I'd like to think Sam was there in some way or another... Besides, I've read somewhere that soldiers in a battlefield will often think they're home with their wives.
Sorry if I made you cry! But I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the compliment. Such few people take the time to review...
Indus