Comments | induil: LJ Idol, season 8, week 5

induil

Nov 22, 2011 18:53

( Destruction )

Comments 11

spirited_grace November 23 2011, 03:09:01 UTC

Great storytelling and interaction between the characters.

Nicely done.

lawchicky November 23 2011, 04:05:03 UTC

Lots of tension here! I'm wondering what happens next.

whipchick November 23 2011, 20:38:38 UTC

Neat to see the next episode! You've got a great voice here, really like the mood of this story.

noodledays November 23 2011, 20:59:05 UTC

you're creating a more and more interesting character. :)

nyxocity November 24 2011, 00:25:17 UTC

I seem to recall this character from before? A reporter and a bell tower? Or am I confused?

At any rate, I really enjoyed this! Well written!