Fic: Three takes on Love

Jul 02, 2010 23:16

Fandom: Naruto
Title: Three Takes on Love
Characters: Temari, Shikamaru
Rating: slight T
Genre: General
Summary: Temari, on life and love and not being in love.
Dedicated to: hungrytiger11 for her prompt "One of the ladies, on not being in love". And for being awesome, as always. :D I don't know if you've left for Prague by now, but I know that Temari is not ( Read more... )

fanfiction, character: gai, character: shikamaru, request, fandom: naruto, fandom, character: temari

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questofdreams July 2 2010, 21:18:21 UTC
I really liked this. Like, a LOT xD You've done a beautiful job with Temari, definitely one I can believe and fit into canon. *mems*

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indira14 July 2 2010, 21:55:59 UTC
Oh my- I mean, you actually liked this! I tried to get her character right and I'm glad you like it! Thank you~!♥

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anat_astarte July 2 2010, 23:18:46 UTC
Great story! I love your insight on Temari, and how these incidents in her life reflect very significant details about her and how they shaped her identity. I also love the comparisons and contrasts between her experiences in Suna and her experiences in Konoha. Lots of great lines in this fic too. ♥

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indira14 July 2 2010, 23:36:11 UTC
Thank you so much - I tried to keep from going into too much detail since a)the word limit was 500 and b)I was running out of time! But I'm still glad I managed to convey some of what I had to say. I'm glad you liked it!

P.S. And your icon is lol ♥♥♥- oh asdgdh, may I please borrow it? I'll credit, of course! :)

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anat_astarte July 3 2010, 20:47:20 UTC
You're welcome! :D

Sure, you can use it! Just credit the actual icon maker, muserific ^_~

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woodrokiro July 3 2010, 00:50:57 UTC
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This was absolutely fantastic. You were so spot-on with Temari's character, and it's so refreshing to see such a wonderful fic of her after such a long time. Well done-- definitely going in my memories :)

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indira14 July 3 2010, 19:52:01 UTC
Wow, thank you - Temari's characterization the thing that I was most concerned about, so I'm glad she seems like herself. It's nice to know you like this! :D

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a_lifestyle July 4 2010, 02:39:12 UTC
Ahh, this was such a refreshing read! The atmosphere was amazing--just a touch of sadness that lingers after you read it. Loved this!

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indira14 July 4 2010, 16:03:26 UTC
I'm sorry - I didn't mean to make you, well, just a touch sad! XDDD Thank you for readng! :D

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tallis_tails July 10 2010, 20:10:27 UTC
I'm really impressed! I don't often get to read about Temari like this, (probably like how she actually is), so it's very refreshing!

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indira14 July 11 2010, 19:31:59 UTC
Thank you - I'm not really sure if this is how Temari actually is! I just got a feeling about her, I suppose (because she was perfect for the prompt), and ran with it! :D

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