Purgatory

Aug 15, 2011 18:30

Fandom: Naruto.
Disclaimer: Nope.
Pairing/Characters: Sakura, Sasuke
Summary: In which Sasuke is detained, his mind half-crazed, and there is nothing Sakura can do for him

For corydrane @ help_japan . Some of the canon facts may not add up, and I'm really sorry about that because this really wasn't supposed to be AU at all. AND THIS IS SHIT LATE I AM SO SORRY.

He's broken, she's broken and she so desperately wants him to come home. )

naruto, sasuke/sakura, help_japan

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indigosquare August 15 2011, 21:46:26 UTC
THANKS SO MUCH ♥

Actually, when I was writing the bar scene I totally thought you'd appreciate it because, well, it contains Kakashi and Sakura :D but I couldn't leave Kakashi out because he is awesome! OMG SPECIAL SLOT that is a great idea he must have such a hard time eating and drinking.

You're really really welcome! Thanks so much for the prompt anyway, I think this is best fic and I'm quite pleased with it. HAHHAHA 3 FICS?! It's ok I still have 1 more for a pairing I have never written for orz

also, since I am on like a friending-spree right now, imma go ahead and add you because you were cool at the auction when I didn't have a clue wtheck was going on, and you've been fcking patient and basically you are also a fan of izaya/namie which goes into my good books :D

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indigosquare August 15 2011, 22:21:06 UTC


Kaka/Saku is a pretty awesome pairing actually, and they could totally work together. (okay I confess, I mostly love kakashi but whatevs) AND YES I HAVE SEEN THOSE OH HO HO HO HO AT KAKASHI WEARING THEM. And why do they totally fit him? Because, hello, he reads porno all the time and openly in front of 10 year old kids.

ARGH ALL THESE COMPLEMENTS I AM SO HAPPY THANKS MAN sorry but I just HAD TO LAUGH at the performanceanxietycockblock

WOOOOOT, here's to drafting loads of fics for pairings that will never be written.

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mangacrack August 15 2011, 20:45:03 UTC
this is awesome! usually I aviod SasuSaku fic's like hell, but in situations like that I adore them.
the setting was awesome, let alone the interacting. Not to mention that I'm a sucker for a less-than-sane Sasuke

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indigosquare August 15 2011, 21:47:32 UTC
Thanks! I'm quite proud of this fic too.

And yeah Sasuke has gone totally batshit insane now. Sometimes it can be pretty cool 8D

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krissasaur August 16 2011, 01:53:47 UTC
err... i just looked through your LJ and are you a fanfic/icon journal? because i don't read fic or have interest in it? nor really interest in icons. :/

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indigosquare August 16 2011, 15:03:05 UTC
D: so far, basically yeah.

oh dear this clearly wasn't meant to be );

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krissasaur August 16 2011, 16:46:24 UTC
oh shame. sorry~

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indigosquare August 16 2011, 16:57:43 UTC
it IS a shame 'cause we had similar likes, but D:

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therentyoupay August 16 2011, 03:59:04 UTC
HOLY CRAP, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.

I love your writing style! Seriously. Everything from the perfect diction to the strategically-placed paragraphs, to the italics, and the dialogue. Definitely one for the rec lists, and I'll be looking into reading your other works for sure!

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indigosquare August 16 2011, 15:03:44 UTC
THANKS MAN, THANKS SO MUCH.

Recs?!?! omfg I love you. Srsly.

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nervousvenus August 16 2011, 04:13:33 UTC
It's been ages since I actually read Naruto, so I hardly ever read Naruto fic unless it catches my eye (AND CLEARLY THIS DID), but this? This is gorgeous. It's deliciously angsty, and I think I'm in love your writing. AND THE ENDING OH MY GOD, I love the ending, it's powerful and just perfect and awesome. Thank you so much for the great read and for making me want to pick up Naruto again.

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indigosquare August 16 2011, 15:05:01 UTC
SQUEEEEE you are amazing, seriously, and thanks so much. And yeah yeah! go pick up naruto again! It's ending soon (or at least I think so, and I have felt that way for a longggg time ._.)

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